Don't Take It Personally, Babe, It Just Ain't Your Story

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become a teacher. The students in his class are Arianna Belle-Essai, Kendall Flowers, Taylor Gibson, Charlotte Grewal, Isabella Hart, Nolan Striukas, and Akira Yamazaki. Rook and all of the students have school-issued computers, which the students use to communicate between each other in private and public messages. Rook, and therefore the player, can see all of the messages that the students send, even the private ones; the school administration has told Rook that it is for monitoring online bullying, and that he is not to let anyone know that he can see students' private messages.

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continues without her, and a little while later Arianna, if the player rejected her earlier in the game, makes another attempt to have a relationship with Rook. The player may choose to accept or reject her again. Through Amie, Rook learns that both Charlotte and Kendall separately wish to resume their relationship; the player can choose to influence Charlotte to try again or not, which changes whether or not the couple gets back together. Taylor jealously and unsuccessfully tries to drive a wedge between Nolan and Akira.

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she was dead via Amie as a prank that got out of control. Furthermore, they already knew that he could see their messages; Akira's mother explains that the students have no idea of online privacy, having always had technology like Amie, and assumed that anything they put online—even "private" messages—might be read by anyone. The game ends with Rook having a casual lunch with the students, a date with Arianna, or neither, depending on the choices made during the game by the player.

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Rook can reciprocate or not. Akira soon announces that he is gay, finding to his dismay that everyone else already knew. He then attempts to enter into a relationship with Nolan, who is unsure how to respond; Rook can encourage Nolan to try it out or let him decide on his own, but he enters a relationship with Akira regardless.

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The next day, Isabella misses a meeting she set up with Rook, and does not return to the class. Through Amie texts and wall posts, the other students insinuate that she committed suicide, and the school administration tells Rook that they cannot provide him with any contact information for her. Class

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that serve as foreshadowing for future plot points. These extra conversations take place in parallel to in-person conversations between characters, occasionally at the same time; the player is notified anytime a new text message or post is made. A single playthrough of the game takes "over an hour".

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called the game "a meditation on privacy in the modern age" and "one of the more thoughtful games to come out in a long time." He criticized the art direction of the game, saying that the limitation of creating the game in a month led to poor artwork and an unpolished presentation that let down the

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figures. Upset by these occurrences, when Akira's mother asks to speak to him concerning misuses of Amie, he assumes that she has found out that he is spying on the students' conversations. When he meets her, he finds that Isabella is alive and had simply moved away; the students made it look like

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described the game as "a game about love, sex and the internet" that was "capable of being profoundly moving" and was about "what it is to feel like someone's kicked me straight in the heart". He praised Love's ability to use dialogue to effect an emotional response, though he noted that the game

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Soon after the game opens, the player learns that Kendall and Charlotte have just broken up out of a lesbian relationship, while a few weeks prior Taylor and Nolan had broken up out of a heterosexual relationship. Arianna develops a crush on the teacher, which in the player's first decision point

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The game is set in a private high school in Ontario, in 2027. The player follows a new 11th-grade literature teacher at the school, John Rook, who has recently had his second divorce and is undergoing, in his words, a "bizarre midlife crisis" that has led him to quit his career in computers and

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gave the visual novel the award for "Best Script" in its video game awards of 2011, stating that "Love's layered narrative of a high school teacher embroiled in his student's worries goes places most mainstream video games wouldn't dare." Pete Davison of

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You will be able to access all your students' social networking messages sent across our AmieConnect system, both public and private There would be serious repercussions if the students ever found out, though, so please be discreet.

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was a weakness in the story, given that the distinction between boundaries and privacy was crucial to the plot. Love collated common criticisms and reviews of the game on her blog, summarizing that while it was less praised than

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possibilities of the story. He did note that the story and writing of the game made the downsides of the game "almost entirely a moot point", and that it is a very strong game. Pete Davison of

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game pick" by IndieGames's Michael Rose, who said that it was worth playing through multiple times in order to see the different paths the story takes depending on the player's choices.

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I'm the world's biggest fuck-up. I've managed to screw up a whole two marriages, and become a teacher because of a bizarre mid-life crisis. I'm looking forward to working with you all!

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noted the game as an example of the "creativity" missing in many large-budget titles, and praised the story, calling Love "a writer first and a game developer second." Alec Meer of

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engine. It was Love's longest game to date, and her first attempt at a game with a branching storyline. It was intended as "a spiritual sequel of sorts" to

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A screenshot of the game, showing an Amie conversation thread between several of the students during a conversation in the classroom with Charlotte.

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was developed over the course of a month, and was released as a free download on April 4, 2011. It was written and developed by

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I saw your coming out on Amie, and you have to admit, it's funny that you were the last person to figure it out.

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I think we need to have a conversation about what's been going on with the school's social networking service.

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hey, did you hear about bella? :( she killed herself. right after the last time we saw her, apparently.

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As the end of term approaches, Rook begins getting strange emails about Isabella's death, and begins seeing

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seemed to lose some of its impact in the final chapters and felt that the use of the "12chan" threads as a

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elements of the story and those of the game itself, with special acknowledgment reserved for the writing.

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In a departure from most visual novels the player can also see, at any time, the equivalent of texts and

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game where the majority of the story is told through still images of the speaking characters in front of

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I like you Nolan. Would you like to hang out some time? I just really want to get to know you better.

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I'm sorry, but we don't have any current way of getting a hold of that student's parents at all.

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called AmieConnect (often shortened to "Amie"), as well as conversation threads on a

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Apologize for not having the answer / Ask why he doesn't just give it a shot

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So can someone explain to me what exactly is up with the lesbians this week?

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That's pretty heavy. give me a day or two, k? I need to think about it.

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After you dumped me! Do you have any idea how humiliating that was?

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Don't Take It Personally, Babe, It Just Ain't Your Story

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You keep saying "privacy". What a strange, antiquated concept.

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Akira Yamazaki has a big announcement to make: he's gay.

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You should go back with her, like you obviously want to.

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Game Writing Month), a month-long contest in the vein of

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