779:, Thanks for your suggestions to insert citations, which I have from Chelsea website. Other citation on Sr. Celsius life and works, the nuns never wrote about themselves or each other, but did their work quietly to be unknown. A lot of Chelseaites reminisced nuns, teachers who had a great effect on their upbringing, which they do share on the Facebook. But such citations are not to be cited here on Knowledge. Others may have written in their blogs, which again may not be cited.
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I have completed writing the article of CJM-Chelsea, Shimla and I moved it from draft space to publish mainspace. Any input in my final work from you or from any other wiki-editors would be greatly appreciated! I have a few photos of the
Chelsea buildings but I have not uploaded to wiki-commons as
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I have tried to shorten it. For me to shorten it even more of such a depth of its history, would be to just say what is already on its website, short and only related to the present day schooling. That would not make the history of
Chelsea. It is so much more. But I certainly appreciate your input
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Chelsea school history as the boarding spanned for over a 100 yrs. All the boarding events, routines written herein were the same for all boarders year after year. That's how the schooling, education, curriculum and the care the students/boarders received from the nuns and the teachers of CJM. It
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I was a student of CJM, when it was a boarding school. In writing this article, I would like to preserve the beautiful history of the self-giving sacrifices, care and love for the students in their educational/developmental needs as given by the Order of
Convent of Jesus and Mary nuns and teachers
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Wikicommons shared photos. I will later. I notice already there is a notice on this draft with sources connected to CJM. That must be wiki help desk/editors. I will definitely use those links/news/books/google results given. Thank you very much!
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I have
Chelsea school photos of the buildings: church, main building, Claudine Thevenet Hall, school class-rooms building, the Hall room, basket ball court. This one uploading to wiki-commons may be a violation under the Indian copyright law even if I got permission from the school? It is very
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Chelsea history as a boarding span over 100 years compared to the day school it is now. I would like to break down the history in two parts but not sure how to get that sub section in the infobox. Boarding School 1864-2000. Day School
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I have not yet asked the school and none of their pictures can be found in wiki. It is recent photos so I think there may be copyright by India copyright (so I may probably not ask or use those buildings photos).
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Adding the school crest in the infobox. (I see from WikiSchools that under Fair Use as an illustration on infobox that may be ok to copy from the school website? Not violating copyright or a replacement of
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I hope you are agreeable to that, as any boarding schools, an infirmary was vital as part of the daily boarding school operation such as the rectory, dormitories, infirmary, class rooms, play grounds, hall
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Infirmary section, I used other CJM schools ' reference to the infirmary, as Chelsea has not record in its present school website on infirmary and the school fete, then.
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hello there! Impressive work addressing the different issues! Tagging a page does not confer a special responsibility on the person who tagged it afterwards. I reviewed the page as part of
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525:, Thank you very much for the infobox improvement and cleanup! Pls note my above note to add Chelsea school years into two section in the infobox. Have a great day! Best!
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The advice on WikiProjectSchools are good guidelines. Your advice and input would be greatly appreciated for improvement. A few items I would like your input on:
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