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Additionally, the "implementing practices" section excludes a major wellness center in San
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Implementing practices section reads like a list of programs that deal with ACEs and doesn't really dive into what makes these programs work or what groups them together other than ACEs. I'm going to start going though and try to weed out parts of that section that need improvement. Also if
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ACEs may have. Specifically, focusing on meta analyses and peer reviews regarding the close connection between ACEs and each of (1) criminality and (2) homelessness would allow this article to expand into other social factors that also have health impacts.
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anyone wants to help there's a real need for sources for some of these claims in the article. I added a bunch as well as a section on the physical health effects of ACEs, it would be nice if someone could do the same for mental health and expand it.
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not meet wikipedia standards. An example of this is the Martin et. al. (2006) which presents "preliminary evidence." Another example is the article written by April Sorrow which is actually just a news article which covers a different publication.
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