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Portuguese designs for forts at that time would be interesting, but without sources that name this fort, that would be original research. I don't think I can add anything else.
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Brebbia source description - good catch. The other sources are single-author, so are o.k.. The lack of description of the physical fort is annoying, but I think this article scrapes the barrel of what is available online. My guess is that there has never been any archaeological
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