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it's short mainly unrelated sentences grouped together, it's like "I can find sources for A, D and F let's forget B, C & E", it has no flow to it at all. This needs some work IMO, I would have requested a Peer Review before putting this up for
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With so many sources coming from Lauer himself of WWE on WWE it walks a fine balance on neutrality, at least the text is mainly neutral, just a problem with it being Lauer calling himself the "most prominent villanous
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I see several gaps there that are just unaddressed leaving the reader to wonder if what the heck is up. Also the fact that he managed Sid when he turned heel and was part of the angle with Hogan was totally
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Part of being "well-written" is to avoid wrestling jargon and being too "In universe" - in other words if it presents wrestling as real it's not "well written", I see very few attempts at "un-kayfabing" the
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Reference 1 - very used, the top source on the page - It's a bit of a problem that a big part of the sources are from the subject itself, it's Lauer's book that's cited not reliable 3rd party coverage.
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This is very sporadic in coverage, "broad in coverage" cannot even be said to apply to his wrestling career. I get the following timeline on his wrestling career.
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either and will review this without bias towards the subject. If you think this is a problem say so and I will withdraw stop reviewing this article.
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