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Article provides a good overview of the class, and the descriptions of each ship are suitable leadins to their own articles, without needless digression.
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As I said, there's just a few minor things that need addressing here, so I'm putting this on hold until they can be tweaked.
216: 310:"followed her sisters after a two year delay...", accurate but looks slightly awkward. Perhaps "The construction of 530:
Article lacks images; I assume this is because there are simply no suitable free-use images that could be provided?
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Very nice work here on some rather obscure ships. Just a few niggling things keeping this from passing:
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Added and all are linked in the lede. All other comments addressed except as noted.--
318: 303:"Her crew was relieved in 1884 and the ship remained on station... 1887", was 256:"...all three ships only served...", suggest "all three ships of the class..." 307:
crewless at this time, laid up at anchor? Or was another crew put aboard?
321:" should be wikilinked (are there pages for any of the other Stations?) 484:
Article does not appear to be involved in any editing disputes.
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Article is well-referenced to reputable sources and avoids OR.
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