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Generally a pretty sound article with no issues. I've undertaken a couple of minor copyedits. I've tried to curb my natural
Britishness on spelling, grammar and punctuation, but if I suggest you do something that is wrong or awkward in Americanese, please let me know: similarly, if my copy edits have
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I was the one that wrote the citation for the DVD notes, so I'll chime in here. There are seven directors (that I counted) in the season - would it be better to list them all, then? I can add them all in for the uses of that citation in this and other articles if it would be preferable. And the long
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With reference to the DVD citation, I suggest we follow the 'normal' academic route (or one of them, at least): in the references you list full details of the work - including all authors. In the footnotes the first author plus et al "Carter, et al (1995-1996)" which will point people to the full
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Hammond / Oswald / Liquori were adolescents until later in the article (and it's supposed to be one of the more important aspects of the episode. Perhaps re-work the first line to that effect along the lines of "In a Connerville, Oklahoma video arcade, three
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vs short citation thing - the short citations are used for page references for books, long form are for websites or other media. It's a mix that's been used and accepted before, especially as short-style linking to websites is a bit awkward and redundant.
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All the points above were addressed: thanks for that. Unfortunately a few subsequent edits have caused a few other wrinkles in the process. I've sorted one or two of them myself, but if you could sort out two of them I'd be
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