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I disagree. The statement in the article is not in a quote from Rhonda Sing and seems to me to be a insertion of the author to tie her comments together. In any event, I am willing to compromise by saying something along the lines of "it was rumored that she was found in possession of cocaine...".
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Disclaimer: I am indeed a big wrestling fan and a frequent editor of professional wrestling articles but the only edits I've ever made to this article is upgrading three "questionable" sources to three reliable ones, nothing else. I am not a member of the
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Here we begin with the "in universe" problem that many pro wrestling articles suffer from. it's presented as a real competitive sport through out the article, it needs to be addressed before this can be considered anything close to a "Good
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237:"Nakano also traveled to Mexico"... Also in regards to what? You start out by saying "also" but there is nothing preceding it. Maybe mention that she went to Mexico after she stopped working for AJW??
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Printed sources need chapter names and pages or they're just a general reference to a 400+ page book, so all "Wrestling Title history" sources that do not already have this need to have it added.
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Not very board in coverage, pro wrestling & golf yes, but there has to be more for it to be considered "board in coverage", this just describes Nakano the professional, nothing personal.
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I could probably get a fair use picture of her since she doesn't wrestle anymore. I really hate doing that, though. However, if you think it would benefit the article....I'll do it.
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wrestling-titles.com has not been found to be reliable, should be replaced, this reference has been removed in past Good
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Source #10 contradicts that Nakano retired in 1997, stating that she teamed with Dump
Matsumoto in 2001 - something also not mentioned in the article.
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either and will review this without bias towards the subject. If you think this is a problem say so and I will withdraw stop reviewing this article.
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Height & Weight - conversion templates please, also being from Japan she would be listed in Kilos and Meters first, then US equivalents
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