119:"They accomplished the task on the April 16 episode of Impact! Kong would turn face by attempting to retaliate." With the way it's written, it seems like a run-on, since i'm not sure if the exclamation point is meant to be the end of the sentence.
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Just a couple small things; I'll put the article on hold and pass when the issues are fixed.
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Thanks for the review. I've addressed all of your concerns.
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174:Looks good, article now passes.
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