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Hi - thanks again, so much, for all of your help with the article. I think I addressed every issue, and I think I fixed all of the references' formatting issues as well. I also think that the title "Kidnapping of Peter
Weinberger" is far more appropriate and definitely fits the scope of the article
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For the first point, I tried finding a source on that information, but I couldn't find one that elaborated on the relationship between Parisi and LaMarca (and why LaMarca wanted to "make life difficult" for him). Honestly, I don't even know how Parisi and LaMarca knew each other. The most detailed
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After his arraignment, La Marca identified one Joe Parisi as his accomplice. When Parisi was apprehended, La Marca recanted, claiming that he had merely wished to get Parisi into difficulty. He then told detectives that his accomplice was one "Shorty", but although they located one "Streety", who
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Your diligence here serves you - and this article - well. The archiving of
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to a generic law of that sort, and nothing that elaborates on what law it is. (Several states had/have identical laws on direct appeals of that sort, but I don't know exactly which one to cite for NY, the law's name, or exactly when the law was implemented.)
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much more appropriately than "Angelo LaMarca" (which is now a redirect page). One final quick question - is it necessary to archive all of the
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Thanks so much for offering to help! I'm very sorry that I missed a few of the points made above. I'll make the corrections and archive the
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Leave a note on this page when you have completed archiving the
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I don't love the phrasing of this; it makes it sound like LaMarca himself was personally postponing everything when that was obviously not how it worked
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established his innocence, they were unable to locate "Shorty." That was the last information police obtained from defendant concerning any accomplice.
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Why did he get the automatic appeal (besides it being law)? What law was triggered, that any capital punishment cases are appealed?
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Why did he get the automatic appeal (besides it being law)? What law was triggered, that any capital punishment cases are appealed?
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