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As some of the issues haven't been addressed in the 8-day period, including a decent expansion, I'm failing this GAN. The article can be renominated at any time but I would suggest fixing these issues. Thanks.
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You don't see the problem? 'Respectively' is used when referring to two or more items, in this case there is only one chart position of South Korea.
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Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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I don't really see the problem, it finishes the sentence smoothly. Do you have any suggestions of what to change it to?
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This is an extremely short article. On hold to see if some serious improvements can be made.
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Why is there no mention in the article's body that the song was inspired by Russell Brand?
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According to digital sheet music published at Musicnotes.com by Sony-ATV Music Publishing
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repetition of 'the song' from previous sentence, and is name is Russell not Russel.
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The lead sentence of the reception section needs a bit of a copyedit.
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taken from her second mainstream studio album Teenage Dream (2010)
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I don't find this necessary here, it's just a bit out of place
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it's her third studio album, let's not beat around the bush.
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The article is ABSOLUTELY NOT broad in its coverage.
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Subsequent comments should be made in a new section.
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