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November 2019, India’s consul-general in New York was captured on camera speaking to a private audience on the reforms executed by the Indian government in Jammu and Kashmir, explicitly citing Israeli settlements as a source of inspiration. “We already have a model in the world,” he said. “If the
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Much of discussion in prominent media outlets have been framed around how an entire state was muzzled at gun-point, and a bill (concerning their future) was passed. I am not seeing anything on those aspects.
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Why are we even discussing such a tangent section? Because, had Art. 370 not be effectively nullified, this reorganization bill was sheer unconstitutional. Need that.
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