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I really do think so. It's confusing to randomly drop Manu's name and not leave even a brief note. Maybe say something like "Ted joined Cody and Randy (without Manu) to form The Legacy." It's just confusing, because it doesn't tell me if Manu is gone, or if he was a hidden member, or what.
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Because their both DiBiase's. It just makes sense that if you're using one of their first names, you should use both of their first names. Would it sound better to say "Obama and
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In that case, I'd suggest you take it up at WT:PW, and have the managers removed from the In wrestling section altogether. Until then, I see no reason to go against the standard applied to all wrestling articles. For example,
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It's the standard and accepted format to have it there, the fact that his manager is already listed in the prose is irrelevant. Managers are often listed in both the prose and the In wrestling section.
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And yet, you haven't said to put quotations marks around it in prose. What makes the image caption different? I'd also point out image captions in other articles:
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There should be a note of the new rivalry with HHH/HBK. Just a small note that they began a direct rivalry with DX and will compete against them at SummerSl
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Why is KENTA notable enough to be included in that sentence? If he's not, remove him. If he is, explain why it's important that Ted wrestled him.
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The "managers" section can be removed. It was mentioned in the article, and is only one person. Therefore, it's redundant to list there.
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It seems really unnecessary to say "without Manu". Surely if he's not named as a member, it's obvious he's not in the group? ♥
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I still disgaree, so I've reworded it to "the DiBiase brothers" which I believe is an acceptable compromise.
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