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Reporter Ethiopia link is down and the WSJ article is behind a paywall, but given that NA has been here for years and isn't currently blocked for all kinds of disruption, I suppose I can apply good faith. The hook is somewhat interesting and the hook fact is accurate and cited with an inline citation in the article and it is neutral and does not focus unduly on negative aspects of living people. Oh, it has citations at the ends of paragraphs. And bonus points to NA for not wikilinking $ . Now, if you can put all the right stamps and signatures in all the right places on all the pieces of paperwork, feel free to send this on. I think I'm done with this nonsense--I'm never catching up with Ernst and Crisco anyway. Sayonara.
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has been described as the "oldest modern mineral water" and
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