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ALT1 is fine, tick provided. Neutrality-wise, it looks fine to me; the closest towards the non-neutral border is "by an unfriendly press", though I wouldn't mind letting it slide for now. The only other concern I have isn't related to the hook itself, though I'm surprised the assassination section
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The hooks makes no sense as written; Narutowicz was the one killed, not the one behind the propaganda. I think, perhaps, "admits" should be "amidst"—
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I should have re-read the hook more carefully. BM is right. ALT1 proposed below (
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