270:). Duplication Detector does not identify anything of concern. The hook has several issues: a) It's not a proper sentence (the word 'in' may be missing), b) it lists numerous facts, which makes it hard to comprehend and appear dull; I suggest that less is more, c) where in the article does it talk about the 'state legislature'?, d) each little fact in the hook needs to have a direct reference in the article where the fact is mentioned (after each sentence mentioning the fact); this DYK requirement is not met. So overall, whilst this is a lot better now, we are not quite there yet.
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I have addressed the length and added additional references. Let me know what else needs to be done. I am sorry it took me so long but I am a student taking 20 units and simply did not want to do a half assed job. I can continue adding more content. If you look at the talk page there are more sources
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The above concerns have not been addressed within a week. The article is still too short, and the only reference is self-published. The only action by the nominator was to remove the self-published source template within hours of me placing it. I have reinstated that template and explained the
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Having now looked more closely, the reference is self-published and thus does not meet the requirement of a reliable source. The following statement appears under the reference: "This article is part of
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Voters in west Contra Costa County overwhelmingly passed a parcel tax
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For "The hospital was bailed out through several state loan, county funding, and ballot measure schemes throughout the 2000s decade as it struggled to remain open.", would you provide quotes here from each article to show which part of the sentence is verified?
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Please check the article for close paraphrasing and failed verifications. I will be closing this DYK nomination as "no consensus to promote" if I see concerns in a subsequent review because the nomination has been open for a while now.
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Okay, I thought as long as it was at the end of the paragraph it was ok but since it's more strict than that, I added them in line as well. Thanks for not dropping the nomination. I am just trying to get things right. Let me
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No worries. I am glad you have learned something new today: Each sentence should be supported by the closest reference that follows it. Would you review the article to ensure that you are doing this for every sentence?
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Sure, I'll get right on that. Also, I just finished citing every sentence in paragraphs that were only sourced at the end, and in addition to that the other two sentences that were not cited.
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I don't see how you fixed the problem I pointed out above. The wrong source still supports the sentence I quoted above.
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