Knowledge

Template:Did you know nominations/El-Tigani el-Mahi

Source 📝

408: 536: 380: 371: 325: 314: 292: 281: 345: 584:
not to overstep, but if you can copy edit the text of an article, that is always good (at least that is what I do). But if it’s beyond repair you can just tag it and ask the promoter to fix it. As for this specific case, you can go through the edit history in the article and see what BorgQueen did,
93: 477:
for advice on the copyvio situation, because it's indeed the quote that's tripping earwig up. This is only my second ever review, I'm not entirely confident in ignoring the 44.8%.
223: 650: 88: 604:
ALT1 needed some slight tweaking as I feel like it was not worded just right. I have made the hook mirror the article text without changing the intent.
585:
which basically reducing the size (while keeping the core message) of the quotation to address your concerns about copyvio 19:25, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
523:
maybe you did that already, but would it possible for to click on "Earwig's Copyvio Detector" and see if "a bit of rewriting" is still warranted.
251: 36: 557:
So, just for the sake of my own elucidation, the next time I review a DYK and face this problem, I just copyedit the article myself?
17: 331: 339: 44: 143: 308: 83: 365: 286: 275: 113: 40: 118: 567: 528: 487: 457: 432: 335: 243: 544: 510: 633: 612: 206: 179: 160: 103: 65: 190: 579: 561: 524: 500: 481: 465: 453: 447: 426: 247: 246:). Self-nominated at 09:02, 15 April 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom 239: 191:
Sickness and the spirits: a study of the Zaar spirit possession cult in the northern Sudan
213: 623: 552: 540: 518: 506: 473: 319: 255: 644: 98: 407: 167: 29:
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below.
629: 61: 535: 35:
Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
258:
this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
195:
Al-Tijani Al-Mahi.. Pioneer of psychiatry in Sudan.. Old stories about Al-Zar
123: 210:
had in his collection coins that date back to the Alexander the Great era?
422:. Once that's fixed, we can look at ALT1, the most interesting hook here. 194: 47:), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. 617: 184: 452:
I think the copyvio issues relates to the quote. QPQ is being done
231:: I like the ALT1, magic seems to attract people to read an article 252:
Template talk:Did you know nominations/El-Tigani el-Mahi
148: 497:
Looks like the article will need a bit of rewriting.
351: 261: 470:
Waiting for you to do the QPQ. Meanwhile, I'll ping
214:
Professor Tigani El Mahi: Short biography and photos
108: 374:- Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith 358:Hook has been verified by provided inline citation 224:
Template:Did you know nominations/Chadd Cumberbatch
620:and their relationship to mental health? Perhaps 539:Looks OK now, after I've copyedited it myself. 164:was dubbed the "Father of African Psychiatry"? 8: 628:can help tweak further while it is in Prep? 49:No further edits should be made to this page 71: 348:- Earwig shows 44.8% violation possible 74: 651:Passed DYK nominations from April 2023 268:Article is new enough and long enough 7: 24: 18:Template:Did you know nominations 534: 406: 378: 369: 343: 323: 312: 290: 279: 616:pioneered studies on magic and 187:relationship to mental health? 68:) 15:19, 9 June 2023 (UTC) 32:Please do not modify this page. 1: 183:pioneered studying magic and 389: 45:Knowledge talk:Did you know 37:this nomination's talk page 667: 636:) 15:17, 9 June 2023 (UTC) 547:) 16:30, 8 May 2023 (UTC) 531:) 15:44, 8 May 2023 (UTC) 513:) 15:13, 7 May 2023 (UTC) 460:) 00:05, 6 May 2023 (UTC) 417:Second biggest problem is 168:The Mahi-Baasher Heritage 119:Find sources (notability) 94:Earwig's Copyvio Detector 574:17:18, 8 May 2023 (UTC) 494:05:16, 6 May 2023 (UTC) 439:06:08, 5 May 2023 (UTC) 41:the article's talk page 505:care to take a look? 109:A Simple Word Counter 89:Reviewer instructions 332:copyright violations 411:Biggest problem is 114:Reviewers' template 340:close paraphrasing 303:Policy compliance: 613:El-Tigani el-Mahi 400: 399: 388: 387: 309:Adequate sourcing 300: 299: 259: 216: 207:El-Tigani el-Mahi 198: 180:El-Tigani el-Mahi 171: 161:El-Tigani el-Mahi 135:El-Tigani el-Mahi 132: 131: 658: 627: 583: 573: 570: 564: 556: 538: 522: 504: 493: 490: 484: 476: 469: 451: 438: 435: 429: 413:possible copyvio 410: 390: 382: 381: 373: 372: 352: 347: 346: 327: 326: 316: 315: 294: 293: 283: 282: 262: 237: 211: 188: 165: 72: 56:The result was: 34: 666: 665: 661: 660: 659: 657: 656: 655: 641: 640: 639: 621: 577: 568: 562: 558: 550: 516: 498: 488: 482: 478: 471: 463: 445: 433: 427: 423: 379: 370: 344: 324: 313: 291: 280: 155: 153: 149:Article history 137: 128: 104:Character count 69: 30: 22: 21: 20: 12: 11: 5: 664: 662: 654: 653: 643: 642: 638: 637: 605: 601: 600: 599: 598: 597: 596: 595: 594: 593: 592: 591: 590: 589: 588: 587: 586: 398: 397: 386: 385: 384: 383: 375: 360: 359: 350: 349: 328: 317: 298: 297: 296: 295: 284: 270: 269: 248:will be logged 235: 234: 233: 232: 226: 217: 199: 152: 151: 146: 144:Back to T:TDYK 140: 138: 136: 133: 130: 129: 127: 126: 121: 116: 111: 106: 101: 96: 91: 86: 80: 77: 76: 54: 53: 25: 23: 15: 14: 13: 10: 9: 6: 4: 3: 2: 663: 652: 649: 648: 646: 635: 631: 625: 619: 615: 614: 609: 606: 603: 602: 581: 576: 575: 572: 571: 565: 554: 549: 548: 546: 542: 537: 533: 532: 530: 526: 520: 515: 514: 512: 508: 502: 496: 495: 492: 491: 485: 475: 467: 462: 461: 459: 455: 449: 444: 443: 442: 441: 440: 437: 436: 430: 421: 420: 414: 409: 404: 395: 392: 391: 377:Interesting: 376: 367: 364: 363: 362: 361: 357: 354: 353: 341: 337: 333: 329: 321: 318: 310: 307: 306: 305: 304: 288: 285: 277: 274: 273: 272: 271: 267: 264: 263: 260: 257: 253: 249: 245: 241: 230: 227: 225: 221: 218: 215: 209: 208: 203: 200: 196: 192: 186: 182: 181: 176: 173: 172: 169: 163: 162: 157: 156: 150: 147: 145: 142: 141: 134: 125: 122: 120: 117: 115: 112: 110: 107: 105: 102: 100: 97: 95: 92: 90: 87: 85: 82: 81: 79: 78: 73: 70: 67: 63: 59: 52: 50: 46: 42: 38: 33: 27: 26: 19: 611: 607: 559: 479: 424: 418: 416: 412: 402: 401: 393: 355: 302: 301: 265: 236: 228: 219: 205: 201: 178: 174: 159: 57: 55: 48: 31: 28: 610:: ... that 287:Long enough 254:; consider 238:Created by 204:: ... that 197:(in Arabic) 177:: ... that 124:Hook length 75:DYK toolbox 580:Festucalex 563:Festucalex 525:FuzzyMagma 501:Nikkimaria 483:Festucalex 466:FuzzyMagma 454:FuzzyMagma 448:Festucalex 428:Festucalex 419:QPQ needed 336:plagiarism 276:New enough 240:FuzzyMagma 624:Ravenpuff 553:BorgQueen 541:BorgQueen 519:BorgQueen 507:BorgQueen 474:BorgQueen 170:, page 89 158:... that 99:QPQ check 84:DYK check 645:Category 396:: Done. 330:Free of 266:General: 256:watching 220:Reviewed 212:Source: 193:page 280 189:Source: 166:Source: 58:promoted 630:Bruxton 403:Overall 320:Neutral 242: ( 229:Comment 62:Bruxton 338:, and 608:ALT1a 366:Cited 356:Hook: 16:< 634:talk 569:talk 545:talk 529:talk 511:talk 489:talk 458:talk 434:talk 244:talk 202:ALT2 175:ALT1 66:talk 618:zār 394:QPQ 250:at 185:zār 60:by 43:or 647:: 566:• 560:〜 486:• 480:〜 431:• 425:〜 415:. 405:: 368:: 342:: 334:, 322:: 311:: 289:: 278:: 222:: 139:( 39:, 632:( 626:: 622:@ 582:: 578:@ 555:: 551:@ 543:( 527:( 521:: 517:@ 509:( 503:: 499:@ 472:@ 468:: 464:@ 456:( 450:: 446:@ 154:) 64:( 51:.

Index

Template:Did you know nominations
this nomination's talk page
the article's talk page
Knowledge talk:Did you know
Bruxton
talk
DYK check
Reviewer instructions
Earwig's Copyvio Detector
QPQ check
Character count
A Simple Word Counter
Reviewers' template
Find sources (notability)
Hook length
Back to T:TDYK
Article history
El-Tigani el-Mahi
The Mahi-Baasher Heritage
El-Tigani el-Mahi
zār
Sickness and the spirits: a study of the Zaar spirit possession cult in the northern Sudan
Al-Tijani Al-Mahi.. Pioneer of psychiatry in Sudan.. Old stories about Al-Zar
El-Tigani el-Mahi
Professor Tigani El Mahi: Short biography and photos
Template:Did you know nominations/Chadd Cumberbatch
FuzzyMagma
talk
will be logged
Template talk:Did you know nominations/El-Tigani el-Mahi

Text is available under the Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike License. Additional terms may apply.