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ALT1 hook is passed. Phrasing in article is much better; I think it resolves my concern raised above. Everything else checks out. Also (just a note) nominator has <5 DYK credits so no QPQ needed. Regards,
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Thank you much! I placed a set of new quotation marks, added references where I think appropriate, added a couple of new outbound links for the .gov reform effort, and edited throughout to clarify meaning.
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It's improved, but I'm not sure that it's improved enough just yet. Compare for example "federal agencies to "get smart" about consolidation, sharing platforms, and computing resources" with
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From what I can see, you've addressed the paraphrasing concerns. The only other concern I had was the use of external links within the body of the article (discouraged by the
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Thank you, Moswento. Much appreciated. I added those as external links at the bottom of the page and also cleaned up a leftover.
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manages the HowTo.gov website to help government workers deliver a better customer experience to citizens?
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