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a thorough review and caught the copyvio and sourcing issues (an indication that some rigor in DYK review is now in evidence). On the other hand, considering the sourcing and copyvio issues in this article, I would not encourage you to spend your time reviewing other DYKs per the QPQ requirement; rather, I would ask that you spend some time reviewing your past DYKs for any possible sourcing issues, copyvio, or plagiarism. These pages may be helpful:
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that if we have about 60,000 visits per year, every one of those patients will go home and tell at least one person about their experience,' said the chief executive. 'That's 120,000 people who will have an opinion on our ER.' ... The majority of visits to the ER aren’t emergencies, and administrators at
Flagler were noticing that more people without health insurance were using it in place of doctor’s office visits."
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Article: "The ER recorded 60,000 visits per year, and most of them were not true emergencies."Source: "Finding the company’s mission wasn't Gordy's only priority; he also needed to find a creative way to improve patient satisfaction, starting with the ER. 'I spoke with ER staff members and told them
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The article has a distinct shortage of reference citations (footnotes). The DYK rules call for adequate reference support throughout, with an expectation of at least one footnote per paragraph. It appears that the interesting history section, which is mostly unreferenced, is partly based on
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PS - It appears that you have several DYKs under your belt, so you should be trying your hand at some DYK reviews for the "quid pro quo" requirement. Did you do one for this nomination? Do you need some free advice (worth every penny you pay for it!) to help you get started?
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Thanks for the improvements to the article. Regarding the number of reference citations, I guess I was not sufficiently clear. The concern is not with the number of sources cited, but rather with using footnotes to indicate where the article information came from, per
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Flagler and his role in establishing the hospital.
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resulted in a big increase in admissions, with almost 40 births per month."Source: "The year 1943 saw the number of patients cared for skyrocket to almost 200 per month with the birth rate running close to 40 per
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Orlady, to the best of my knowledge, all of the issues raised in this DYK have been resolved. If you agree, please finish the review; if not, let me know specifically what remains. Thanks for your assistance.
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No response to Cunard's comments in several days, article has not been touched since 9 November. Enough is enough. Thank you, Cunard, for going above and beyond the call of duty here.
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Gil Wilson is a reputable individual who provides a lot of St. Augustine information via the internet. I have found his website to be accurate and unbiased.
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Gil Wilson is a reputable individual who provides a lot of St. Augustine information via the internet. I have found his website to be accurate and unbiased.
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I believe you mis-stated the above. You should have said, "1946 and 1957". I changed to article to better match the source.
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