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English sources. There is one small typo in the article: "countrie food culture", but this should easily be fixed. The third paragraph is also awkwardly written and may need to be rephased, though I guess this can be done quickly so it's not a point against the nomination. However, although ALT1 was my preference, it seems to
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Chinese. The source is behind a paywall, does the source comment on his fluency, if if so, would someone add the degree of proficiency to the article body, so that
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Article was created on the day it was nominated so it meets the newness and length requirements. Article is adequately sourced, and the image is appropriately licensed. Earwigs gives a score of 0.0%. Both hooks are sourced inline and verified; Swedish source accepted for ALT0, while ALT1 is cited to
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