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OK, thanks for sorting that out. Continuing the review: the article's size and date are sufficient, the hook is sourced, and there are no copyright issues that I've found. I've tweaked the hook very slightly to correct its grammar. We're good to go now.
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In the references given, not finding verification for this information: "it is placed at 16:26 UTC into a low Earth orbit of 686 km (426 mi). The first signal from Göktürk-2 was received at 17:39 UTC in the space center in Tromsø, northern Norway"
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