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due to her success in the following works" The wikipedia: "Jaklin Çarkçı started her career as a soloist for the
Istanbul State Opera. She had her first role as Azuncena for Giuseppe Verdi's Il trovatore in 1988. She was then appointed as part of the soloist staff of the State Opera Ballet." The alteration is largely cosmetic, making this close paraphrasing for me. I'll AGF with Turkish sources, but a general rewrite to make sure there is no close paraphrasing at all would make me happier.
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Turkish women" isn't neutral and borders on promotion. The whole sentence should be framed as "she claims that she is not only..." or something that shows "We" aren't saying this about her,
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Original editor cleaned up the page and I copy edited some parts so that the close paraphrasing and neutrality issues have been resolved. Article is long enough, new enough, QPQ done, within policy, hook is cited in
English-language source, and hook is short enough.
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