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If the columns do state that it was an incurable disease, then perhaps "suffered from an incurable disease" would be better: "caught" implies that it was communicable, but if it doesn't say, genetic is equally possible. And if they don't say incurable, then such statements need to be removed from
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I'm sorry, but I have a real problem with this hook. An undefined "deadly disease" is odd to have in an article: usually, a name is given to a disease, as any disease that ends up killing the person who has contracted it is "deadly". A more successful hook might note that he took up golf due to
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Hungarian, so I can AGF the language. The article was sufficiently expanded in the typical time period and is well sourced, though I'd prefer to see a reduced reliance on
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both article and hook. One possibility for a new ALT if "incurable" can't be sourced: add "as" after the initial "that" and an apostrophe after his name, and delete everything after the name up to (but not including) "health".
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Hungarian, I did some minor improvements and also retouched the photo. Hope it helped. The article looks good at first glance. It's 5x expanded, sources seem to be decent. The hook is sourced.
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probably because of privacy reasons. What about replacing "deadly" with incurable or if not than just cut it out entirely?
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caught a deadly disease and as his health faded he had to give up tennis and subsequently took up golf?
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