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subscription reference, AGF. In the second half of the third paragraph, you mention the fuel depot at Naval Base Point Loma. However, your source, ref #12 La Playa Trail
Markers, indicates that the fuel depot was in La Playa, which on the map for that source is north of Point Loma. Also, the very last sentence of the article needs an inline citation. I've added an image and caption (the 1850 map of San Diego) to the article. Thanks to the two of you for creating and nominating this article.
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of the first paragraph. Also, I wasn't able to find the information for the last two sentence in your second paragraph in the specified source. Please just do a generalize check of your references. Date and length are fine. Hook correctly formatted and cited. No copy vios detected as yet. Article well-written. Will look at again later this afternoon.
211:, from "False Bay" (now Mission Bay) on the north to the southern tip. The modern map at the same reference makes that clearer. La Playa is exactly where both maps show it: At the southern terminus of the trail, on the east (Bay) side of Point Loma, and currently on the grounds of Naval Station Point Loma.
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You're good to go! Also, next time you write an article and have a photo that you'd like to add, just give me a holler (it doesn't have to be for DYK). I'll make sure that it has an appropriate license and add it for you. Also, for your next article, we can explore the issue of infoboxes (assuming
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Thank you very much for adding the map! We had identified that map as something we would like to have in the article, but didn't know how to pull it in; I had asked a friend for help but he hadn't gotten to it yet. The map adds a lot to the article, thank you.
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