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The first hook is the worst hook. And it is grammatically incorrect. I'm objecting to the promotion of the first hook. I reviewed this, and the nominator supplied multiple hooks, meaning that a choice was offered. I've picked one that I think is the best. That is the process. It really doesn't matter
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Passed GAN and nominated for DYK within allowed time. Prose length okay. QPQ done. Original hook doesn't make sense to me, the term isn't specific to being in the studio, and I've never it in that context before. Usually the term describes a person. It also has a grammatical error which causes it to
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I still don't think it's very good or makes sense. It's too long-winded. I really don't get the issue here. The whole point of providing alternative hooks is so that the reviewer can pick from a choice if the original one is deemed not good enough. I've reviewed all of them and have picked
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Well what's the point otherwise? You only ever have or need one reviewer to sign off a DYK nom, nor have I asked for a second opinion. It's not an FLC or FAC where many people weigh in and support or oppose. There's really no point in my reviewing this if the hook that I approve out of a
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of three for me to choose from is not going to be respected. There's nothing even wrong with ALT3, and it is by far the most interesting (the only one in fact) so I really don't get why a mountain is being made out of a molehill here or what the issue even is.
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