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In-line citations exist, with two exceptions. Claim in first line (which must be verified as is part of the hook) that it is the third highest award is not cited in the
Gazette, which merely described the creation of the award, qualifications of recipients and its appearance. Also last paragraph is
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Hook is 157 char, within 200. Above clarification of "third highest award" must be addressed. Additionally, source doc says award created in 1954 was called "Padma
Vibhushan" not "Padma Bhushan". (The name change (1955) did not happen until after Bhabha had received it.) Sources do confirm Homi J.
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Thanks for adding that, even though the name change did not occur until after he got the award, the document which verifies he was a receiver states he got "Padma PB" (Padma
Bhushan) as opposed to PV (Padma Vibhushan) or (PS) Padma Shri. So, based on this rationale, I'm going to say the hook is
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Added source for the third highest award. I dont think the last para falls under WP:OR as its just a condensed and textual representation of the tabular data which is sourced with the in-line citations and thus not cited per
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Bhabha received it in 1954 and was the creator of the bomb, but citations do not appear with the hook claim. Perhaps you can extend the text under his photograph to state that he was one of the inaugural recipients?
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