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Finnegas, just so you know, you shouldn't be using any of the first four official icons in your own replies; these are for reviewer use. To clarify the "bit short of 5x expansion" comment, the article has 548 prose characters prior to expansion, and currently has 2561. It needs 2740 prose characters
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