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I found her mentioned as giving him more help than was in the article; added a point and a book reference. In my judgment she squeaks by as notable; even though we would probably not know about her if her brother had not been famous, she is discussed as doing things, as well as being the recipient of
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Catholic husband might be a little wrong even though it is true, but that is maybe what is called "hooky"? Additionally, the
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Thanks for improving! - By "closest" I tried to summarize that he felt closest to her of all his relatives, she received most letters, he stayed with her and received her care when he was ill. That is sourced. If you can word it better, great,
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