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Has been promoted to GA status, meets the length criteria and seems to be written neutrally. However, there are a couple of issues with the hook โ€“ firstly it's a bit convoluted and secondly the hook isn't backed up by the source โ€“ it was an engineer that described it as a guinea pig, not Macmillan. I
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Perhaps instead of my originally suggested hook, it can mention that it had to close after just a few weeks (something which received alot of parliamentory mention, as sourced in the article). So perhaps something
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But even then, there's still a problem with the hook, because not all of its content is included in the article. I also think a hook along the following lines would be better:
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ALT2 is definitely the best. Hook cited and faithful to source. gained GA status in requisite time. article also free of copyvio. good to go.
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seem to be highlighting commonplace info that could apply to many motorways around the world.
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would advise killing two birds with one stone by shortening it to simply "... that the
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Methinks that that suggested alternative is not really interesting enough. How about:
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was Britain's first constructed motorway to open on 5 December 1958 by Prime Minister
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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below.
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Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
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