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Article's references check out, no copyvio, length is good, image is acceptable, hook is 161 characters. The only negative is that the hook is pretty luke-warm. Is there nothing more notable about this player? How about adding the fact that he's just joined the majors after 3 years in the minors? —
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This is my first ever participation in the DYK process. As a reader of the Knowledge main page, I also think the website hook is more interesting. That prompts curiosity about the player and draws me into reading the article. --
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Personally I think this website is much more interesting. Being in the minors for three years before making the majors is pretty standard. There may be a better way to write the hook that I'm not thinking of.
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Oh duh, you're right. The whole point is that it's a professional player helping other professional players, and I left that out of all the hooks! Well, if Bagumba is Gandalf, I guess that makes you Obi Wan.
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Suggested fact is backed by an inline citation that has been verified. I strongly suggest adding that Claiborne is a professional player or else it seems like an article about a random sports writer:
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calls him "one of the site's most prolific contributors." The article and hook should spruce up that he does more than just merely "contribute".—
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Should attribute the source if using a direct quote. Alternatively, paraphrase "most prolific". I'll propose a couple more ALT hooks.—
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Bagumba, as always, proves himself to be wise beyond his years (assuming of course Bagumba is male and not Gandalf). – 
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That or something about his dad telling him to play like a Yankee, and his coincidentally becoming a Yankee. – 
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is one of the "most prolific contributors" to a website that gives tips on surviving the rigors of
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one of the "most prolific contributors" to a website that gives tips on surviving the rigors of
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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below.
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is one of the major contributors to a website that gives tips on surviving the rigors of
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players give tips to other players on surviving the rigors of minor league baseball?
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is a major contributor to a website that gives tips on surviving the rigors of
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Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
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I had meant hook, not lead. Shows I was tired when I nom'd this. – 
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Nom made May 3. Checking for verification. Editor DYK QPQ still pending. —
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