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The article seems to mostly be okay at first glance and the hook fact is cited inline. However, even as a seiyuu fan myself, I'm not really a fan of the hook as currently written, it seems a bit niche and may not appeal to those who aren't into
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Rereading the article again, it reads much better and meets DYK requirements. A QPQ has been performed. While I think ALT1 is written better than the original, after taking a second look at the article, the hook doesn't actually match the article wording. The hook says that a "special video" was
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It sounds better, but it may be a good idea to mention that
Takarazuka Kinen is a racehorse, just in case those unfamiliar with the JRA think they may be about a different kind of racing (like for example motorsports).
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Thanks for the review; the hook doesn't focus on voice acting itself but more on the show, which is what the article is about.
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I think it would be a good idea to specifically focus on the challenges done with the horse, rather than mentioning the JRA.
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with the horse angle, but the hook will need to be copy-edited and rewritten to focus mainly on that instead.
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Well for one thing I had to fix the bolding of the new proposal (which I've labeled as ALT1).
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Thank you, I think there are no more issues so we should be good to go with ALT1.
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