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New enough, long enough, neutral, hook referenced. Some might object to the no. of pics, slide-shows etc, but not me. Earwig 53%, but only finds quotes and "the
President of the United States". All the refs for the hook say Kalakaua had the first "state dinner", but I suppose it isn't a state visit
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President?". You will see the media is currently full of "redundant" "foreigns" re the change of president.
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They might be confused for half a moment, however intelligent. A lot of editors do overestimate the intelligence, or age, of many of our readers.
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On reflection, the caption would be better re-arranged to: "Kalakaua of Hawaii is received by
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I think we should omit the word "foreign" because it is redundant. See the definition of a state visit in the article.
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Really? People would wonder if the US presidents visited the US? I must be overeestimating our readers' intelligence.
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Kalakaua is received by
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The hook uses the word "state" three times which seems excessive.
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