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While ALT1 makes the blanket statement "was inspired", the article says "may have been inspired" and the source says "was probably inspired". Hooks should not turn possibilities or likelihoods into absolutes. Under the circumstances, I wouldn't go any further than the article allows; perhaps the
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New enough and long enough. Mostly meets core content policies. However, the hook isn't directly cited and sentences like "...imagination and his instincts for color resulted in a highly personal and original style." sound a bit promotional. That specific example is also closely paraphrased.
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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below.
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Manigault developed a highly personal and original style
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