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In 21st century when people enjoy 5G connectivity, have access to the best health care system, high speed trains. The residents of this particular valley lack very basic things of all these facilities that surely make the hook interesting and it is the fundamental principle of DYK to make people
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I missed that in the lead, but it really belongs in the body also. I'm concerned that hook/article say the villages have NO electricity/connectivity while the source says the PEOPLE have no electricity/connectivity and goes on to explain there is some electricity generated locally providing some
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That doesn't appear to be relevant anymore, but the fact that some villages are without electricity or road connections isn't anywhere near interesting or curious enough for a DYK hook. There are hundreds of thousands, if not more, villages out there in the world that don't have such basic
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communications and some lighting (solar), and there is some road connectivity part of the year. I suggest a minor change, either:
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The hook was already present in the lead section. I have now included it in the body (access section) as well.
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As far as the prose is concerned I expanded the article which is now again more than the required.
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