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pages listing university, because they never had such pages. They only use Government site as general source of information about their offices. Still, I decided to keep these links as it at least shows these ministries exist. If I should remove them - please let me know - although these links were present from my very first attempt, and just now I hear they are "unhelpful". Trying to "navigate" through all comments and recommendations I receive is a bit like sailing on unpredictable weather, with wind hitting you from all directions, ha ha. I do hope that I am closer to the shore now. Thank you!

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Such a short post, but I start feeling like I get more and more confused with each round of changes. Specially as I really tried to compare with other very similar articles - on very similar universities, and make my article fit in their character - to make sure info i include is relevant and to the

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I'm sorry but not surprised you're having difficulty. Knowledge is very counterintuitive. Two suggestions. One, do something easier than writing a new article for your first task. Add something to existing articles that interest you; do some copyediting; update some statistics that change annually.

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I also explained above that being in Veterinary International News is always important thing. They deal only with internationally important veterinary issues and news. It is one of most sought news/info source for veterinary community. I also explained that I can't add links to Dominica Government

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As for links i added VIN (Veterinary International News) is perhaps one of most respected and read source of veterinary-related information internationally. So, this is not just a shabby note, despite the site not looking super shiny. So i thought this is a major change. I will dig deeper for some

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Thank you for your patience with this. I drastically shortened it trying to remove all phrases sounding like a promo. I do hope i succeeded this time. i also restructured it, adding Recognition/Accreditation section in a similar way to other posts I saw on Wiki. Hopefully this is closer to what it

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Hello, thank you for your time reviewing it, and for your comments. Indeed - I am puzzled as to what sounds like advertising. I went through pain to avoid it, compared with several other similar articles to make sure it is in line with other such posts. i tried to include only facts, and add links

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So, I find it puzzling that somebody decided it is a good fit for that project, I get invited to submit it to that project, I do it to my best knowledge (maybe i did it wrongly, please let me know), and then nothing of what was described actually applies to my article. It is not there, and I get

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Ok, the promo is gone, and there's a new source, which is good but still not quite there. Are there any other news articles on the university? The footnotes to the two government ministries are unhelpful - they just go to the main website, not the list that actually contains the verifiable

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In the process of removing the promotional sounding copy, you also removed the only independent secondary sources on the article, actually now making it seem less notable. When I write an article about a school, I start my paraphrasing from only

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So - i did it. Deleted most of it. Simplified it, left only a few lines of what sounded to me like bare facts. now i am missing what was most important. Can you please say what is it that was important and removed, so I can

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Please, as you seem to be very fluent in Wiki things - let me know why it is so, and how to enter it to that "Caribbean Schools by Country" Schools Project. I was certain that copied/pasted link into my article would do just

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Well, hello again. as of today, 26 June - I did changes as suggested by Asilvering. I added several international news links about the University. I almost feel it may be too many, but I did not want to fall short as last

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more links, although that one certainly would be the most important of anything to be found. Our government never updates/adds any information about external institutions. they rarely update their own critical info!

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thank you for adding comment. while what you point to - is a cold fact, as it is a priority to keep classes small - i see it can be seen as advert type writing. i will review and try to eliminate such phrases. much

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To be honest I compared closely my text to other universities in the Caribbean, and tried to be closely matching info type and style they display - being long approved on WP. Well, I will try to dig some more, as

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It really is a bit confusing when i am told different things, also seeing on other posts that stuff I am told is totally irrelevant (like accreditations) is used in other articles in prominent separate

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I also did some reading and it was clearly explained that articles in that School Project go under different rules and do not go under scrutiny of these rejections - they need to be correct factually.

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validating them. Can you please suggest what should be changed? I am 65 y o professional who wrote many various articles, and this one eludes me. your help would be much appreciated. Thank you!

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thank you very much. i will do as you say, and after spending time on these other tasks will return to my article. will see if i improve or remain hopeless ha ha...

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well, it seems that each helping person has a different approach. another person (Jeskie Curiano) said all that info was irrelevant and should definitely go.

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So, i did that, and in my latest submission I included the link to that section (which If I am correct - should automatically show this article there).

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has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Asilvering was:

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Thank you for your comment. At least I am heading in the right direction, ha ha. So not all is lost.

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Thank you for letting me know. Oh my. I hope it alt least shows my determination to correct things.

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than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a

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So i will leave them there, to at least show who they are, I guess...

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still blatant advertising needs a complete re-write in neutral tone.

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