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Dniprodzerzhynsk Metallurgical Technicum in 1935" As a 5 in 4 graduate? "In 1963 also, Brezhnev succeeded Frol Kozlov," how did he manage this? "While a minority headed by Mikoyan wanted to remove Khrushchev from the office of First Secretary but retain him as the Chairman of the Council of Ministers," how did Mikoyan get rolled, admittedly outmanoeuvring Mikoyan is as easy as buying a bottle of milk, but? Many people saw him as a bit of a Zhou Enlai in the day. Your narrative fails to give contextual meaning. The why questions are left unanswered. "including the intelligentsia," technical or cultural? Finally some why, "T.H. Rigby argued that by the end of the 1960s, a stable oligarchic system" but it is a single source buy into a very complex topic, you should at least deal with the SWP(UK) line, and the 4th International line, both of which form major historiographies of the failure of the Soviet Union. NPOV issues, "and clamping down on cultural freedom." You actually mean freedom of political expression. The term "cultural freedom" is associated with US funded right wing exile juntas and occasional paramilitary organisations, it is a technical term in this context, avoid. Mischaracterisation, "state security service (the KGB) regained much of the power it had enjoyed under Stalin"... so they ran an independent counter economy in extraction and manufacturing? "and Stalin's legacy remained largely discredited among the Soviet intelligentsia." dubious. The Soviet social category of intelligentsia formally included the technical intelligentsia, military intelligentsia, the bureaucratic intelligentsia.
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University Presses expected here? There are a couple of NPOV issues with wording (assuming the reading subject is American, use of words bound up with American ideology in the cold war). The language also needs polishing. There are structural problems with the presentation, the time narrative jumps around. This is a good article, particularly in terms of economics in the 1970s; but it needs some more work.
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Kosygin and Brezhnev were mentioned a lot, and there are even books specifically on USSR/PRC and how they competed over N Vietnam. But the internal communist politics and heavy funding for N Vietnam is almost not mentioned at all, nor China (apart from the fact the US lost). The article is generally nbot very long for the leadering Soviet leaders for 20 years.
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Hungary 1956, particularly because of Czechoslovakia 1968. Early life is underwritten for a politbureau grade bureaucrat. Essential biography here would include his factional position and graft network. Was he
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Vietnam War books have a lot about the wheeling/dealing between USSR/PRC/US, and they discuss Kosygin/Brezhnev in quite a lot of deal, including the USSR/PRC split and how the US tried to play them against each other etc, and in
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Penguin work, even if from a scholar, which lacks a specialist focus on Brezhnev. I do not believe the article is currently sourced adequately, post Soviet Russian works?
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