3382:"Following the Battle of Blenheim, Eberhard Louis spent the remainder of 1705 and early 1706 in Nymphenburg Palace. Inspired by Munich and Versailles, and having a pretext for a new palace in the Erlachhof, Eberhard Louis renamed the estate Ludwigsburg (Louis's Castle) in 1705 and began studying the architectural trends of his day. Eberhard Louis sent the theologian Philipp Joseph Jenisch to study architecture abroad in 1703 and made him director of construction on his return the next year." This is confusing. You say "the remainder of 1705" but remainder after what? Presumably the battle of Blenheim, but you have not stated the date of the battle and why is it relevant where he stayed? It seems odd to say that the destruction of a hunting lodge was a pretext for building a palace. You then imply that Eberhard Louis was planning the palace in 1705-6 but go back to say in 1703.
1958:"Surrounding the residential palace on three sides are the 32-hectare (79-acre) Blooming Baroque (BlĂĽhendes Barock) gardens, which attract 520,000 to 550,000 visitors annually." - Please no. I suggest we first learn about the gardens and their history, then about the strange name which sounds like a marketing name, and then about that the marketing worked. When were the gardens called BlĂĽhendes Barock? (A name which is pure nonsense.) And by whom?
3368:"Ludwigsburg Palace was opened to the public in 1918. The next year, and 100 years prior, it was where the constitutions of the Free People's State and Kingdom of WĂĽrttemberg (respectively) were ratified." This is confusing. Maybe "Two constitutions were ratified in the palace, that of the Kingdom of WĂĽrttemberg in 1819 and the Free People's State in 1919. The palace was opened to the public in 1918.
2747:- an example would be the break seen here "Michael Hörrmann, the director of the State Agency for Palaces and Gardens, valued the portrait at a minimum of €1 million."; or here "the Baden-Württemberg State Agency for Palaces and Gardens plans to have spent €4 million to sort out and restore some 500 paintings, 400 pieces of furniture, and 500 lamps, clocks, and sculptures,"
174:." ... Does it get better? And why not a conversion to acres to save us the millions and millions. Does "German" (language) really need to be linked? "Germany" certainly doesn't need to be—unless the reader is Trump or a five-year-old kid. The country-link will be in the Ludwigsberg article, anyway. Later, I see the garden alone is "3,400,000 sq ft": how can that be?
2912:"Opposition to the palace itself was found at the ducal court because of Ludwigsburg's cost. The populace also chafed at the palace's cost, one pastor in nearby OĂźweil (de) saying at his pulpit, "May God spare our land the chastising that the Ludwigsburg brood of sinners conjure."" - perhaps combine the two sentences and make them more concise?
2402:"Nette made two trips to Prague and his native Brandenburg to expand his pool of talent, in 1708 hiring fresco painter Johann Jakob Stevens von Steinfels (de), stucco workers Tomasso Soldati and Donato Giuseppe Frisoni, then Andreas Quitainner in 1709, then Luca Antonio Colomba, Riccardo Retti and Diego Francesco Carlone." - seems like a run-on
2490:"In the early 1930s, Wilhelm Krämer (de) began hosting the Ludwigsburger Schloßkonzerte (Ludwigsburg Palace Concerts), which comprised six to ten concerts annually from 1933 to 1939, performed in the Order Hall, the Ordenskapelle, or the courtyard." - might split off the last bit following "performed..." into a separate sentence
3540:"Ludwigsburg Palace had already been the residence of Frederick II since 1795, who made it his summer residence. On 18 May 1797, the duke married Charlotte, daughter of King George III, at St James's Palace in Westminster. They used Ludwigsburg as their summer residence" Repetition of "residence" three times and "summer" twice.
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Para 2 of the lead is too long & detailed. Too many dukes & too many architects. Save them for later. Or possibly that stuff should be in an overview section below the lead, which also could have the wider context of city & palace, alternate capital & where & what the Duchy of W
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General: the alt texts for images are not yet really telling a blind person what can be seen, - and could you help finding the ill-links for German, Italian, Danish ... people? - The ALT texts for this one, please, ill-links in the next FAC, or actually for all articles you write. Did you see that
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I formatted the infobox a bit. I don't see any advantage in having it collapsed, just more white space. The "alt" text shouldn't be a repetition of the caption, but explain to a blind person what you see on the image. Please, generally, avoid fixed image sizes, - upright factors (from 0.7 to 1.3)
2458:"In 1764, Charles Eugene moved the ducal residence back to Stuttgart and made no more modifications to Ludwigsburg from 1770 onward." - I think this is an uncommon use of "onward", which usually refers to physical direction IMO. I'd replace with "after 1770" or something more prosaic
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Curzon is published by a niche press, but she appears to have a decent reputation as an amateur historian and I have no reason to believe that she's unreliable for what she's being cited for. The rest of the publishers appear to be mass-market or academic and can be assumed to be
3410:"Jenisch returned to WĂĽrttemberg and began construction from Weiss's plans in 1704" What happened to Weiss? Was Jenisch only instructed to complete Weiss's modest manor house? Why would he have been sent abroad to learn if that was all he was doing? These points need clarifying.
1684:"on the ceiling of the beletage by Leopoldo Retti, preserved from the 1720s" - I think saying something was different style and then back to the former is fine, but "on the ceiling of the beletage by Leopoldo Retti from the 1720s" would imply it was there all the time, no? --
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English-speakers). Now after the lead the article plunges straight into a really detailed & dense history, followed by an equally dense description of the building, which is probably more than most readers will want.
3623:"The ceiling fresco was lost, when the gallery was divided into smaller rooms from 1808, until its restoration from 2000 to 2004." What does this mean - that the fresco was covered over for a century and revealed when the partitions into smaller rooms were removed?
3753:"Construction of Ludwigsburg Palace began in 1704, but by 1710 Eberhard Louis had decided to use Ludwigsburg Palace as his main residence rather than just a hunting lodge." You say above that he decided in 1704 to build a small palace, not a hunting lodge.
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I think the sentence, "It also includes porcelain from the manufactories at
Meissen, Berlin, Sèvres, and Vienna", works fine. It denotes those links as to manufacturies. Unpiping the links would lead to a lot of " porcelain factory" in English and French.
2444:"La Guêpière completed the Schlosstheater from 1758 to 1759, adding a stage, machinery, and the auditorium. A wooden opera house, adorned with mirrors, was constructed in 1764–65, located east of the Alter Hauptbau." - same note as above with date ranges
1506:"At the top of the stairs is a guard room and then the beletage's four suites, following the French Baroque model of a living room, audience chamber, and bedroom". Don't we need "are" (not "is") fofr more than one? I only count to 3, not 4, in the model.
1027:"felt that he had to express this accomplishment in architecture, as Eberhard Louis had attempted" - no way that Eberhard Ludwig could have expressed the same acomplishment (and which anyway) - the wording sounds translated to me, but I may be wrong.
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Construction began in 1704 with
Philipp Joseph Jenisch directing for Eberhard Louis, Duke of WĂĽrttemberg." This is clumsy. Maybe "Eberhard Louis, Duke of WĂĽrttemberg, appointed Philipp Joseph Jenisch to direct the work and construction began in
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I am no friend of squeezed text between images left and right, in general. In particular, the
Courtyard image looks finished, not like construction ;) (actually: nor do the others) - Any other location for that? Better English names in the
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The first image caption is needlessly long, - all we'd need to know is that it was used for important contracts and trials ;) - Put rest in the body, if really needed. - Please link trial in caption, for those who only look at pics ;)
207:"In 2016, the Ludwigsburg Palace attracted some 330,000 visitors." Now it's "the"; but that's missing from the very opening. Which is it to be in a grammaticalised sentence (as opposed to the article title)? And why not "the Palace"?
1752:"restricted by Protestant doctrine to illustrations of the Apostles", - no, "restricted by Protestant doctrine to illustrations of biblical topics, such as Apostles ..." - link Apostles? - If it's Protestant it was not consecrated.
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I am sure it will come in the details, but here is the plan, and here you could make the connections of architect, year and building, but only for important ones. That could actually also go to the lead then, pleasing Dr. Blofeld.
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Sorry, the whole paragraph strike me as unconvincing. Perhaps I should read first what follows. An overview of the styles, perhaps with some years attached, is desirable, but a load of unknown names is not that. Tired, sorry.
3595:"A witness and his interpreter, an American soldier, being addressed by a civilian lawyer". The caption should say at the Borkum trial. Also the picture description says that it shows the defence counsel addressing the court.
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Don't get me wrong, I don't want you to use the thoroughly unsexy name throughout the article, but once explain please what
Hauptbau means. Or: use Alter Hauptbau, after explaining once what that means. Or: say old Hauptbau.
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The table of contents looks clear, but I wonder if "Hauptbau" is a good a idea, once we started with "palace", and readers may be unfamiliar with the term. Perhaps better use "main building" and introduce the German in the
2579:"The Schlosskapelle avoided major remodeling in the 19th century and is today the most original area of the palace." - bit vague what you mean by original here. I think you mean not restored, but it's not crystal clear IMO
2289:. Thank you for great willingness to change. You may go over the alt texts once more, the queens is more visible as described than Casanova, but that's no reason not to support. Good luck! Let's get to Schloss Köthen ;) --
3160:"Within the palace itself are two museums operated by the Landesmuseum WĂĽrttemberg and dedicated to fashion and porcelain." - I'd add respectively assuming these two museums focus on fashion and porcelain, respectively
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Giuseppe Frisoni - he was introduced before, but I didn't make the connection that Donato Frisoni was the same person. How about same name, or just last name, which would tell people that they should know
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General: How about using this paragraph to once more connect the German terms from the plan to what they mean in
English, and in the later paragraphs use one or the other, without repeating the translation.
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It's debatable if the people mentioned before should get a repeated link, but certainly not a repeated red link. I'd give no first names to those mentioned before, reminding readers that they should know
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Vami, I was indicating that you need to do far, far more than just fix what I pointed out in the opening two sentences. Have you printed out the text and struck through all the woolly wording throughout?
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Set this in its own section. Also, how are the news sources not web sources? If I were setting off a section, it would be "official sources" for those published by various parts of the German government.
3609:"It was originally built just to house the apartments of Eberhard Louis and his daughter-in-law, Princess Henrietta Maria." You say this is 1705-8, but the marriage of Henrietta Maria was not until 1716.
1717:"Joined to the Riesenbau and Ă–stlicher Kavaliersbau by a connecting room on its southern end is the Schlosskapelle" - please no, just to Germanish. Begin with Schlosskapelle, and use joined or connected?
2355:"Philipp Joseph Jenisch, Johann Friedrich Nette, and Donato Giuseppe Frisoni " - presumably architects, but only the last has a link suggesting that... might add "architects" before listing their names
2898:"Opposition to the palace itself was found at the ducal court because of Ludwigsburg's cost." - such passive voice here, and too much separation between the subject and verb for such a short sentence
3013:"Today's gardens were created in 1954 and arranged in a Baroque style for Ludwigburg's 250th birthday. " - "today's" reads oddly to me... maybe better as "the current" or "the contemporary" gardens?
2430:"Charles Eugene began the construction of a new ducal residence in Stuttgart in 1746, but continued to use Ludwigsburg as a secret residence until 1775" - I'd cut the comma before "but continued"
2729:
Refs should be in ascending order for consistency's sake - ie., for "Inspired by Munich and
Versailles,", it should be "Inspired by Munich and Versailles,". Let me know if that needs clarifying.
1651:"Above the entire gallery is Colomba's Gigantomachy", - I'd offer a bit of explanation, what it is (ceiling freco?) and what it shows, - yes, there's a link, but I had no idea before clicking.
3069:"The canal was filled in, maintenance reduced, and an orchard planted on the southern lawns that was later used to grow potatoes." - something about this sentence doesn't sit right with me
2593:"The final and southernmost part of the east wing is the 490 feet (150 m) long Ahnengalerie," - Should be foot, not feet. Add "|adj=on" to the conversion template and that should fix it.
2537:"more grounded Classical form that would then be carried out by Johannes KlinckerfuĂź" - who is this? there's no article, so you should give a brief identifier for the lay reader (aka me)
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How about the name of the builder in German, which would make the explanation of
Ludwigsburg much easier? I strongly believe that his name should be at least mentioned in his article ;)
3827:"Blooming Baroque" gardens - this reads oddly in English. Is it a project/brand name dreamed up for a recent replanting? If so, I think rather too much use of it is made (34 mentions).
871:"... use Ludwigsburg as a secret residence until 1775 and brought the Rococo style to Ludwigsburg in 1747." - I'd end the sentence after 1775, otherwise the chronology seems disturbed.
3711:"The grand staircases on either side of the vestibule, from 1798 called the King's and Queen's Staircases, which lead up to the beletage of the Neuer Hauptbau." This is ungrammatical.
3651:"Thouret walled up the first-floor windows in 1807 and 1708 for seating room and for the king's canopied throne under its star-studded semidome." 1808? to increase the seating room?
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I believe you are referring to the "Eastern/Western
Galleries" here. Since they're not named on the map nor a major part of the palace, I've taken their title-case names away. –Vami
2509:"who were educated in and experienced with Czech Baroque architecture and hired staff also experienced in that style." - I'd cut out the "also"; seems unnecessary for comprehension
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Fixed sentence. I removed "Baroque" from the sentence and added a semicolon to punctuate the "also", a reference to the mix of Baroque styles that is the palace exteriors. –Vami
3055:"From 1797, Duke Frederick II revived the South Garden in a Neoclassical style by dividing it into four equally sized lawns with a Mediterranean theme." - From 1797 until when?
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Thank you for the invitation to an impressive article about an impressive building! I'll read the lead, but will comment on it last, and do little steps, commenting as I read.
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Checking every 10th source starting with #3, or failing that the next available source that I can access. If used multiple times, I'm only checking the first two references.
2626:"which attract 520–550,000 visitors annually." - previously, when listing date ranges, you've shortened the latter number rather than the first. keep it consistent throughout
2870:"The palace attracted more than 350,000 visitors in 2017." - I'd move this to the end of the third paragraph of the lead; I don't think it flows well in its current location
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We heard about many influences from France and Italy, and then are told that it resembles places in Prague and Vienna, - wouldn't that fit the Bohemian influence better? --
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by translated names. Common name is fine, but real name should also show, if you ask me. (Not your fault, but we could start adding a real name in an article like this.) --
2416:"The Bildergalerie was decorated in 1731–32, while the Ahnengalerie was likewise decorated from 1731 to 1733" - be consistent; stick to dash ranges or writing out X "to" Y
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This was there for rhetorical reasons, because he had succeeded his predecessor earlier in the sentence. I don't know what you have against "however". I use it often. --JM
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I don't need such a long hatnote. The other palace, fine, but both the socalled "city" (town?) and the porcelain will be linked in the article, - let's get to the topic ;)
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I have written a very long article and don't want readers scrolling up to get at pertinent links. I have, at least, restricted myself to a single link per section. –Vami
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I think the article is very complete as is. No terribly important additional sources were found with English and German searches into Google Scholar and Google Books.
2472:"Charlotte continued to reside at Ludwigsburg and received many notable visitors from across Europe, among them some of her siblings." - seems a bit vague to not name
104:. The nomination ended in failure, so I let a month of time elapse before re-nominating and incorporating editor commentary on the previous FAC. Here's to progress! –
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It was more some of the architectural details I was looking for, an FA quality article ideally needs to have a summary of each major section written into the lead.♦
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Perhaps it's just too late, but I don't get the meaning of the run-on sentence beginning "E L decided ...". Split in two, or three? And what does overture mean here?
2926:"The Bildergalerie was decorated in 1731–32, while the Ahnengalerie was likewise decorated from 1731 1733." - missing an endash / two inconsistent date range styles
2884:"Construction began in 1704 with Philipp Joseph Jenisch directing construction for Eberhard Louis, Duke of WĂĽrttemberg." - repetition of construction is distracting
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Why south wing but South Garden? Actually I'd understand South Wing, as sort of a name. We just debated Luther monument vs. Luther Monument, ending with the latter.
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Much better, thank you! - How about - once we are next to the plan, say which part was made by whom when - at least for major parts as Alter and Neuer Hauptbau? --
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I'd not link Austro-Czech, and perhaps better not even use it. The later link (Bohemian Baroque) is the one that would fit, while Sudenten German is plain wrong.
2607:"The Ordenskapelle was given its current appearance from 1746 to 1748 by Johann Christoph David Leger" - "given its current appearance"? What does this mean?
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Hey, thanks for your comments so far. In the course of addressing them I've been stumbling over an abundance of information I missed and have since added. –
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Ah. I've moved the Rococo bit back into the first paragraph, since it was a single sentence, and gave the whole second paragraph to the Neoclassical. –Vami
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History - you need to integrate the development of the palace & city better. You should probably start by explaining the Duchy of W a bit - trust me,
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Yes. "Inside are seven hearths, a bakery, a butcher's shop, several pantries, and the quarters for the servant staff in the attic and on the first floor."
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3027:"The gardens comprise smaller themed gardens and the Fairy-Tale Garden (Märchengarten)," - "garden" is repeated three times in such close proximity here
2958:"With his death, the nine-year-old Charles Eugene became Duke, beginning a regency that lasted until 1744." - I might substitute "after" for "With" here
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biggest palace in Germany - just one of. Even though, but total area, it definitely is (eat it, Würzburg!). I've added all your suggestions, also. –Vami
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Got about halfway through. Can post more once these are finished. Still noticing inconsistencies for date ranges and other stylistic things like that.
2101:"40 recreations of fairy tales" - recreations? - I suggest to find a way to link fairy-tale the first time, and be consistent about hyphen or space. --
1520:"Eberhard Louis's apartment is made unique by the addition of a hall of mirrors ..." - suggest: The apartment of EL features a unique hall of mirrors".
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I see lots of "would" future tense. Use it a bit, but not more, please. "that was then carried out by" rather than "that would then be carried out by".
100:
Welcome (back) to the "Versailles of Swabia," one of the largest palace complexes in Germany. After a detailed GAN, I nominated Ludwigsburg Palace for
4125:, SPS, or otherwise very dubious source. However, it looks like you've cited the information to a better source so you could just remove StampWorld.
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Now that the source review has been conducted I think we can promote but I note many duplinks in the article -- pls review/rationalise; you can use
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do something about these stone sculptors of only local prominence, perhaps no link and just two names, - the French one has at least commons images.
1199:"to arrange the Neuer Hauptbau" - arrange? refurbish? whatever, but not arrange. - More later. Vacation from tomorrow, be prepared for delays ;) --
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I would not call it "elegant" either but it is not jargon. It is perfectly correct for giving an example. I would not have made this change. --JM
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I gave the lead a can of spinach and it seems to have bulked up pretty good. Now contains an abbreviated architectural history of the palace. –
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Verified: 3, 14, 25, 43, 53, 66 (at least a bit of the information—assume the rest is in the second source), 73 (ditto), 83, 94, 103, 114, 123
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Just a quick passing comment, the lede looks very short for an FA quality article, I don't see any summary of the architecture for instance.♦
2972:"The palace's first restoration took place at the Alter Hauptbau in 1865." - any records of what happened between 1865 and the public opening?
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By ruler (Eberhard Louis built all the exteriors) or by architect? Both? I also cover that, building by building, in the following sections. –
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3097:"and since 1995 one of the original stage pieces has been used for the Children's Stage (Junge BĂĽhne)." - one of the lights? bit vague here
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I was asked by Gerda and Vami to do another copy edit (first one several weeks ago). I have finished an initial pass and welcome feedback.
1041:"... remodeling, this time the Ordenskapelle and the king's apartment, which lasted from 1808 to 1811" - sounds like the apartment lasted.
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This would displace the portrait of Eberhard Louis and therefore the handy translation of his name and therefore Ludwigsburg. –Vami
2388:"Meanwhile, Nette began the interior of the Alter Hauptbau, which he would never finish. " - not sure that meanwhile adds much here
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Used the tool you gave to vaporize a lot of duplinks, reducing links to one per body section (Architecture, History, etc.). –Vami
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Is this an established rule? I find it OK. We are using these terms for convenience and should treat them as English words. --JM
2369:"It then survived World War II intact, the only palace of its kind to do so," - seems a bit vague - of its "kind" meaning what?
2940:"As the master builder of what was now decried as the "sin palace", Frisoni and Paolo Retti " - should this be "master builder
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Second paragraph: first sentence combines 2 things by "and" which are not connected, opening to the public, and ratification.
3041:"which contains a folly and depictions of some fairy tales. " - any details on which fairy tales? brief mention couldn't hurt
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Changed my mind: keep the courtyard image, but in the caption use the terms from the text. Move the 19th century thing below.
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For fairness: in "Duke Eberhard Louis left no heirs and was succeeded by Karl Alexander." - let both be Duke, or both not ;)
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Done. Moved link to the same sentence I linked Versailles in and replaced the first mention with "Nymphenburg Palace." –Vami
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Issues: Could you give the quote in 33 that verifies the text? I'm having trouble finding it but it could be my bad German.
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English-speakers know this. Was the area entirely rural in 1700? How far from from the palace is a) the city, b) Stuttgart?
3132:" Charles Eugene was the next duke to reside at Ludwigsburg from 1747," - same issue as above with "from" with no end date
3104:
A-ha, my source has some more information. The "original stage pieces" referred to a winter background. Added now. –Vami
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No. There is one guard room, hence "is". I've made some revision to the sentence(s; I split the quoted material). –Vami
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Changed Old and New Hauptbau headers back to North and South wings and introduced translated text in parentheses. –Vami
3083:"ensuring the future of the Blooming Baroque gardens." - might add "continuity" or something like that after "future"?
1003:"Charlotte, Princess Royal, daughter of King George III" - "Charlotte, the daughter of King George III" would suffice.
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Blooming Baroque (translated from Blühendes Barock) is the official name for the gardens of Ludwigsburg Palace. –Vami
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Do we really need 5 headers for the references. (I normally have only 3: (foot)notes, references, and cited sources.)
3396:"established it as the capital of the Duchy of WĂĽrttemberg" I think "designated" would be better than "established".
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There was a review of Pius Bieri's website "SĂĽddeutscher Barock" in the first archive. Self-published website, but
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What do you think of having the plan in the architecture section, where (hopefully) the German terms get explained?
129:"Ludwigsburg Palace (German: Residenzschloss Ludwigsburg), also known as the "Versailles of Swabia", is a 452-room
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As it turns out, I misread the source - Charles Eugene officially made Ludwigsburg his capital. Fixed now. –Vami
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Can we avoid repetitions more, Baroque, Czech Baroque, more Czech. - I wonder if Bohemian would be more precise.
540:"city"? - Project Germany defines a city as something with at least 100,000 inhabitants. I'd prefer "town". See
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I have no idea who Weiss was, where he came from, or where he went, so I just axed him from the prose. –Vami
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Done. Still two sentences, but now the second is supporting the first rather than being its own thing. –Vami
2017:"filling in the North Garden's terraces to replace it with a large broderie" - replace "them" (the terraces)
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Not a run-on sentence, just somewhat lengthy and awkward. I have changed. "Overture" = proposal, offer. --JM
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Purged. Other citation there had the same information, sans the postal stamp, so I removed the stamp. –Vami
2341:"In 2017, the palace attracted over 350,000 visitors." - "more than" probably works better than "over" here
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Besides a few concerns about vague wording, I think this is engaging and in good shape. Comments above.
1989:"collection of broderie parterres, bosquets, and an orangery" - not sure that can be called a collection
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287:"In 2017, 350,642 people visited Ludwigsburg Palace." It's a phone number. Good case for passive voice.
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691:"Hauptbau" would produce "Main building," thus "Old Main building," which is thoroughly unsexy. –Vami
2682:"over 4,500 exhibits of examples of porcelain, ceramics, faience, and pottery" - more than, not over
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please don't use the fixed template in FACs, - some of the FA people are allergic to templates ;) --
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512:
Can we link to the palaces of Munich, instead of the present-day city? (like you do for Versailles)
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Since fixed, I think. If work took place within two years, I use a dash. If not, the latter. –Vami
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1282:"King Frederick I, at the time Duke Frederick II" - I think "Duke Frederick II" would be better.
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If that is the Casanova quote in "Residence", that comes from Wenger's book, in English. –Vami
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Appears to be WP:OR from poor translating from Swiss German (Bieri), corrected. –Vami
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Fixed. Not that it matters, but that was actually not an error of my making. –Vami
1055:"Neuer Hauptbau's" - just no, we can't add an English possessive to a German term.
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or what. Really too bad that so many noble people travel in the English Knowledge
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It is OK but not elegant. The palace is elegant. Thank you for tha many fixes! --
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I've added a footnote detailing that Bohemian influence - does that help? –Vami
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2059:"the Hohenstaufens" - can we please avoid an English plural for a German word?
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but several authors on Google Books refer to or credit his work in their own.
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is a redirect, and the story possibly begins before he was King, - how about
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Recommend that exact dates be removed and years used instead for consistency
2654:"but was restored true to form from 1972 to 1982." - "true to form" meaning?
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I've banished the Ferettis and fixed the link to Johann Wilhelm Beyer. –Vami
1311:
I'll consider methods of expanding/improving the paragraph as you dictate. –
1017:"Friedrich II, now Frederick I" - I'll never understand these noble names ;)
3512:"continued to use Ludwigsburg as a secret residence until 1775" Why secret?
2565:"built from 1715 to 1719 to house courtiers" - is "to" the right word here?
2145:"leaving only the road to the main palace" - what does "leaving" mean here?
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Prague and Vienna come as a surprise after we heard of French and Italian.
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I am no friend of mixing English and German, as Old Hauptbau. At least Old
464:
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Lots of duplicated links throughout the article body - suggest installing
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That's what I mean. His name was "Eberhard Ludwig", or the place would be
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Hyphen added to "fairy-tale" as per Blooming Baroque website theme. –Vami
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Am I the only one to find visitor numbers a bit boring? - How about one?
600:
No need to say "Duke E L" once he's introduced. Just name, or "the duke".
3637:"On the second floor is the duchess' box" duchess' box is ungrammatical.
3480:"so Frisoni brought on Giacomo Antonio Corbellini" I would say "brought
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Can you introduce the order right after "Ordensbau", for the connection?
1766:"Beneath the chapel is a crypt that contains all rulers" - how about "A
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I don't understand the "but" in the sentence with the (too?) many names.
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I've added some detail about each wing to the lead's first paragraph. –
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parameters, as duplicative of the urls and not adding any information.
3339:"later used as a residency" What does residency mean here - residence?
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Changed to "Around 1797", the source only gives 1797 for a date. –Vami
2770:; there should generally only be one link in the entire body section.
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a great deal of Austrian and Czech Baroque influence,"—shows? reveals?
3930:
Unless I missed them we still need image and source reviews. Cheers,
3242:
on 1a. Sorry for the delay and my onslaught of comments. Great work!
526:
How about linking "architectural trends ..." to Baroque architecture?
2087:"which easily became a permanent landmark" - what does "easily" add?
1620:
Why north wing, but Western Gallery? Add German names for galleries?
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Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in
3424:"A pastor in nearby OĂźweil said of the palace at his pulpit" When?
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not sure how a building can begin a wing, as in the first sentence.
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Is the Lego thing notable if the company has no article in German?
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I'd call it town status, or say that it receive town privileges. --
3466:"the building authority was aligned with him" What does this mean.
3146:"and brought the Rococo style with him." - what does this mean?...
1900:"It is home to a statue" - not sure it's the best way to say that.
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I misread the source, the frescoes were removed. Fixed now. –Vami
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Yes, I was, but if you are ready to close then please go ahead.
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I'd unpipe the manufacturers of porcelain, they have good names.
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Frederick I and/or II - I keep being confused (dropped him once)
1842:"King Frederick I's" - looks strange. "... of King Frederick I"?
1914:"Next are the grand staircases" - same, "next" in what respect?
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Sources don't list any so I shrank the sentence instead. –Vami
1784:"The Schlosskapelle avoided ..." no, - a chapel can't avoid ;)
293:
English can be ugly if you want it to be: "Ludwigsburg Palace
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This is the Östlicher Kavaliersbau, not the Riesenbau. –Vami
4143:. However, the source appears to have been published by the
3498:"decorated from 1731 1733" Presumably between 1731 and 1733.
2933:
Simplified sentence, greater detail in "Architecture". –Vami
2696:"children over four years of age about life" - same as above
1856:"due to the difficulty in transporting resources" - what? --
1462:
Can we avoid "whose work Eberhard Louis was familiar with"?
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The repetition explaining history is too long for my taste.
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Changed to "central figures in the construction of " –Vami
655:
Unsandwiched a lot of the article. Did I go too far? –Vami
1588:"piece of clockwork" - why "piece of"? link "clockwork"?
3174:
Still going thru and checking date range consistencies.
1087:"then-modern tastes" - not happy. "in the latest style"?
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I have modified the prose to remove the possessive –Vami
3892:, are you still planning to add something? Tks/cheers,
3697:"a butcher's shop" Was there a shop inside the kitchen?
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Fixed, and thank you for your copyedits thus far. –Vami
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Couldn't find a place to fit this, so I axed it. –Vami
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Too much math: the following year - four years later.
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Should be "Alter Hauptbau" and "Neuer Hauptbau". --JM
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Knowledge:Manual of Style#Foreign-language quotations
3725:"The south garden was into four equally sized lawns"?
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Axed to just Frederick I, continuity be damned. –Vami
1961:"The gardens were to be focused" - hard to believe ;)
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As it turns out, that piece of clockwork is actually
3980:
Has this had a source review that I'm not seeing? --
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Removed all but one; the German-text quotation, per
3767:This is not far off FA, but still needs some work.
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under the chapel is the burial site of all rulers"?
1705:, and the question is: do we need the "preserved"?
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any better word instead of a repeated "take place".
4319:The above discussion is preserved as an archive.
2159:another link to that king, and the the following?
3739:"a knight of the House of Hohenstaufen who is."?
2423:Done. If more than one year, I use " to ". –Vami
1921:Removed all instances of "next" like this. –Vami
3389:I have finished a rewrite of the section. –Vami
2572:Done, changed to "for housing courtiers". –Vami
2254:Understood. On it. Will update on completion. –
1599:the clockwork from Zwiefalten. Fixed now. –Vami
43:. No further edits should be made to this page.
3999:No. See my last response in this subsection. –
2703:Changed to "four years of age or older". –Vami
4325:No further edits should be made to this page.
4298:template in place on the talk page until the
4139:Zum.de appears to be self-published, per its
2979:No. My source jumps to 1939 from there. –Vami
29:The following is an archived discussion of a
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2376:Changed to "It survived of its size". –Vami
1186:Simplified and whittled down into two. –Vami
928:Will readers know what Schlosstheater means?
2891:Fixed, removed second "construction". –Vami
2497:Banished to the Shadow Realm instead. –Vami
2180:Changed to "and then a king in 1806". –Vami
1724:Removed instead (couldn't make work). –Vami
431:No. That is why they are not headers. –Vami
2668:"around 400 paintings" - about, not around
41:Knowledge talk:Featured article candidates
3200:Thank you for fixing some of those! –Vami
2066:Changed to "House of Hohenstaufen". –Vami
1708:Axed both instances of "preserved". –Vami
1327:The deed is done. How does it read now? –
196:I couldn't find a source claiming it was
3153:Axed and moved into next sentence. –Vami
2052:Also rewrote. Rewrites everywhere. –Vami
4147:, which could be listed as a publisher.
3616:Removed "and his daughter-in-law" –Vami
3473:Rewrote this bit, how does it look now?
1170:Axed first visit, revised second. –Vami
684:. And a translation of the German part?
468:, lit. 'Louis's Castle') in 1705" –Vami
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3665:" It was built in 1719 and 1920" 1920?
2003:didn't we link the dukes often enough?
1759:Done. The Apostles was already linked.
769:Fixed; abbreviated to "Frisoni". –Vami
3945:The image review was in archive 1. --
18:Knowledge:Featured article candidates
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3445:Fixed in the rewrite, I think. –Vami
2312:Intending to review the prose here.
1606:"joined to it"? - "connected to it"?
210:Oh man, good catch! Fixed now. –Vami
1623:"peacetime - warfare"? Peace - War?
550:But later granted city status. --JM
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3020:Axed as redundant sentence. –Vami
2845:Thank you for reviewing so far! –
1470:Where would Neoclassical begin?
367:See also article talk page. --JM
290:How do you "sort out" paintings?
167:—the largest palatial estate in
3849:I've trimmed Para 2 down. –Vami
2530:Fixed, "working partner". –Vami
2010:Enacted a link-pocalypse. –Vami
729:Changed to "incorporating" --JM
387:Comments and support from Gerda
1849:Changed to "the king's". –Vami
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1996:Axed because who cares. –Vami
1982:Reduced garden stature. –Vami
1938:22:37, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
1637:link the virtues, or Virtues?
1473:Where in the prose...? –Vami
1143:"restoration took place at"?
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1968:Changed to "centered". –Vami
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4293:featured article candidates
4103:I would get rid of all the
4093:All sources seem legitimate
4039:to highlight them. Cheers,
3048:Added three examples. –Done
815:Why not simply "Residence"?
776:Thank you for the fixes. --
399:respect users' preferences.
125:1a, opening two sentences:
31:featured article nomination
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3008:Final thoughts (continued)
2409:Whittled down a bit. –Vami
2239:, thanks to LouisAlain? --
154:Ludwigsburg Palace's total
102:FAC at the start of August
64:) 23:16, 26 December 2018
4121:StampWorld—appears to be
3746:Edit scar, removed. –Vami
2600:Missed that, added. –Vami
1436:Can you elaborate? –Vami
137:in Ludwigsburg, Germany.
4322:Please do not modify it.
2152:Reworded sentence. –Vami
2031:what are hillocks? link?
942:What is an "opera hall"?
885:"such as when" - really?
133:complex of 18 buildings
36:Please do not modify it.
3519:Removed "secret". –Vami
2307:Comments from Ceranthor
2237:one of them turned blue
163:32 ha (3,400,000 sq ft)
4123:user-generated content
1178:Guess not; axed. –Vami
4170:Spot checks to come.
3800:Comments from Johnbod
1874:Axed sentence. –Vami
1541:Oops. Removed. –Vami
960:"himself succeeded"?
722:explain "absorbing"?
4166:Assume reliability.
3672:Fixed; it was 1720.
2621:Grounds and gardens
1953:Grounds and gardens
4216:Additional sources
3431:1709; added. –Vami
3334:Comments by Dudley
1388:In the lead now. –
810:Use as a residence
73:Ludwigsburg Palace
3658:Yes, fixed. –Vami
2905:Unpacified. –Vami
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2038:Link added. –Vami
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3330:
3329:
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3327:
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3266:
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3237:
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3235:
3234:
3233:Removed. –Vami
3228:
3227:
3204:
3203:
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3201:
3195:
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3171:
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3162:
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3076:Revised. –Vami
3071:
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3037:
3036:
3035:
3034:Removed. –Vami
3029:
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2865:Final thoughts
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2670:
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2661:Removed. –Vami
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2395:Removed. –Vami
2390:
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2160:
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2154:
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2147:
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2142:
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2140:
2139:
2138:Reduced. –Vami
2133:
2132:
2123:
2122:
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2098:
2097:
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2046:
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2041:
2040:
2039:
2033:
2032:
2028:
2027:
2026:
2025:
2024:Rewrote. –Vami
2019:
2018:
2014:
2013:
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2011:
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1816:Thankee. –Vami
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1498:
1497:
1496:
1495:
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1493:
1492:
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1468:
1467:
1466:
1465:Removed. –Vami
1460:
1459:
1458:
1457:
1456:
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1430:
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1421:
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1269:
1265:
1264:
1263:
1262:
1256:
1255:
1250:
1249:
1248:
1247:
1246:Removed. –Vami
1241:
1240:
1236:
1235:
1234:
1233:
1227:
1226:
1217:
1216:
1215:
1214:
1197:
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1189:
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1114:More later. --
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872:
868:
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866:
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859:
858:
857:another "city"
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837:
831:
830:
826:
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816:
795:More later. --
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686:
685:
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627:Need sleep. --
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349:
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122:
119:
98:
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81:Nominator(s):
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70:
69:
46:
45:
25:
23:
15:
14:
13:
10:
9:
6:
4:
3:
2:
4338:
4326:
4323:
4317:
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4313:
4309:
4305:
4301:
4294:
4287:
4283:
4279:
4276:
4275:
4270:
4266:
4262:
4258:
4255:
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4249:
4245:
4241:
4237:
4234:
4233:
4232:
4231:
4227:
4223:
4215:
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4206:
4205:
4204:
4203:
4199:
4196:
4195:
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4189:
4188:
4184:
4183:
4182:
4181:
4177:
4173:
4165:
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4146:
4142:
4138:
4137:
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4128:
4124:
4120:
4119:
4113:
4112:
4111:
4110:
4106:
4102:
4101:
4098:Web (general)
4097:
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4078:
4077:
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4069:
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4057:
4056:
4053:Source review
4052:
4050:
4046:
4042:
4038:
4030:
4027:
4022:
4020:
4015:Requested! --
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4278:Closing note
4277:
4259:on sources.
4256:
4219:
4169:
4154:Added. –Vami
4018:
3983:
3979:
3947:Gerda Arendt
3929:
3874:More later.
3857:
3786:Dudley Miles
3781:
3769:Dudley Miles
3760:Fixed. –Vami
3732:Fixed. –Vami
3718:Fixed. –Vami
3690:Fixed. –Vami
3680:
3644:Fixed. –Vami
3602:Added. –Vami
3556:Dudley Miles
3547:Fixed. –Vami
3505:Fixed. –Vami
3481:
3361:Added. –Vami
3346:Fixed. –Vami
3302:
3272:
3268:
3253:
3244:
3239:
3238:
3218:
3209:
3185:
3176:
3167:Added. –Vami
3139:Fixed. –Vami
3120:
3111:
3109:
3090:Added. –Vami
2996:
2987:
2984:
2941:
2834:
2825:
2811:
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2799:
2781:
2772:
2689:Fixed. –Vami
2675:Fixed. –Vami
2647:Fixed. –Vami
2558:Added. –Vami
2504:Architecture
2473:
2362:Added. –Vami
2323:
2314:
2291:Gerda Arendt
2286:
2241:Gerda Arendt
2233:
2186:
2185:
2125:
2124:
2103:Gerda Arendt
1952:
1951:
1946:Fixed. –Vami
1930:Gerda Arendt
1907:Fixed. –Vami
1880:
1879:
1858:Gerda Arendt
1822:
1821:
1800:Gerda Arendt
1702:
1686:Gerda Arendt
1677:Fixed. –Vami
1664:
1663:
1658:Added. –Vami
1596:
1575:Gerda Arendt
1572:
1551:Gerda Arendt
1500:
1499:
1478:Gerda Arendt
1441:Gerda Arendt
1414:
1376:Gerda Arendt
1345:Gerda Arendt
1298:Gerda Arendt
1294:
1220:Architecture
1219:
1218:
1201:Gerda Arendt
1162:Fixed. –Vami
1154:Fixed. –Vami
1146:Fixed. –Vami
1128:
1127:
1116:Gerda Arendt
1113:
976:Gerda Arendt
949:Changed to "
935:Fixed. –Vami
901:Gerda Arendt
878:Tweaked --JM
809:
808:
797:Gerda Arendt
794:
778:Gerda Arendt
738:Gerda Arendt
701:Gerda Arendt
681:
642:Construction
641:
640:
629:Gerda Arendt
626:
607:Fixed. –Vami
559:Gerda Arendt
485:Gerda Arendt
480:
476:
465:
437:
436:
403:
402:
390:
315:
312:
307:Fixed. –Vami
294:
220:
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179:
177:
171:
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160:
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142:
138:
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124:
99:
80:
49:
47:
35:
28:
4185:Spot checks
4114:Done. –Vami
4072:Done. –Vami
4037:this script
4019:Laser brain
3984:Laser brain
3926:Coord notes
3867:Done. –Vami
3807:Ludwigsburg
3491:Done. –Vami
3403:Done. –Vami
3375:Done. –Vami
3303:Dr. Blofeld
3273:Dr. Blofeld
3265:Dr. Blofeld
2965:Done. –Vami
2877:Done. –Vami
2768:MOS:DUPLINK
2736:Done. –Vami
2633:Done. –Vami
2586:Axed. –Vami
2544:Done. –Vami
2516:Done. –Vami
2451:Done. –Vami
2437:Done. –Vami
2348:Done. –Vami
2270:Finished. –
2199:Done. –Vami
2166:Axed. –Vami
1835:Done. –Vami
1777:Done. –Vami
1745:Done. –Vami
1644:Done. –Vami
1630:Done. –Vami
1613:Done. –Vami
1527:Done. –Vami
1426:Done. –Vami
1289:Done. –Vami
1213:Done. –Vami
1194:Axed. –Vami
1138:Done. –Vami
967:Is OK. --JM
951:opera house
892:Is OK. --JM
836:Done. –Vami
673:Done. –Vami
664:cornerstone
621:Done. –Vami
533:Done. –Vami
466:Ludwigsburg
450:Done. –Vami
348:Jmar67 (JM)
265:Finished. –
169:the country
165:, making it
4141:about page
1881:South wing
1732:King David
1501:North wing
575:Fixed --JM
161:amounts to
4286:WP:FAC/ar
4282:candidate
4105:|website=
4083:reliable.
3683:its west?
2752:this tool
1823:West wing
1703:East wing
1665:East wing
1108:Done --JM
1094:Done --JM
1062:Done --JM
1048:Done --JM
1034:Done --JM
1010:Done --JM
864:Done --JM
850:Done --JM
822:Done --JM
477:Louisburg
141:With the
4304:Ian Rose
4280:: This
4261:Catrìona
4244:Ian Rose
4240:Catrìona
4222:Catrìona
4172:Catrìona
4041:Ian Rose
3932:Ian Rose
3894:Ian Rose
2754:to help!
2745:WP:NBSPs
2126:Favorite
682:Hauptbau
648:caption.
295:exhibits
238:On it. –
145:gardens
139:Together
54:Ian Rose
50:promoted
4257:Support
3908:Johnbod
3890:Johnbod
3876:Johnbod
3820:. –Vami
3782:Support
3240:Support
2710:General
2383:History
2287:Support
2187:Museums
953:" –Vami
438:History
373:Vami IV
172:Germany
135:located
4025:(talk)
3990:(talk)
3354:1704."
355:Jmar67
321:(talk)
226:(talk)
185:(talk)
131:palace
58:FACBot
4058:Books
4007:_IV†â™
4002:â™ Vami
3971:_IV†â™
3966:â™ Vami
3580:_IV†â™
3575:â™ Vami
3320:_IV†â™
3315:â™ Vami
3291:_IV†â™
3286:â™ Vami
3247:ceran
3212:ceran
3179:ceran
3114:ceran
2990:ceran
2853:_IV†â™
2848:â™ Vami
2828:ceran
2805:ceran
2775:ceran
2317:ceran
2278:_IV†â™
2273:â™ Vami
2262:_IV†â™
2257:â™ Vami
2214:–Vami
1768:crypt
1736:David
1396:_IV†â™
1391:â™ Vami
1365:_IV†â™
1360:â™ Vami
1335:_IV†â™
1330:â™ Vami
1319:_IV†â™
1314:â™ Vami
1254:them.
410:text?
338:_IV†â™
333:â™ Vami
273:_IV†â™
268:â™ Vami
261:Tony1
246:_IV†â™
241:â™ Vami
156:area
143:added
121:Tony1
112:_IV†â™
107:â™ Vami
89:_IV†â™
84:â™ Vami
16:<
4308:talk
4265:talk
4248:talk
4236:Vami
4226:talk
4176:talk
4088:News
4045:talk
3951:talk
3936:talk
3912:talk
3898:talk
3880:talk
3790:talk
3773:talk
3560:talk
3254:thor
3219:thor
3186:thor
3121:thor
2997:thor
2835:thor
2812:thor
2782:thor
2766:See
2336:Lead
2324:thor
2295:talk
2245:talk
2107:talk
1934:talk
1862:talk
1804:talk
1690:talk
1579:talk
1555:talk
1482:talk
1445:talk
1380:talk
1349:talk
1302:talk
1205:talk
1120:talk
980:talk
905:talk
801:talk
782:talk
762:him?
742:talk
705:talk
633:talk
563:talk
489:talk
481:only
359:talk
316:Tony
221:Tony
180:Tony
62:talk
56:via
4300:bot
3888:Hi
2474:any
1597:all
404:TOC
198:the
151:its
52:by
4310:)
4296:}}
4290:{{
4267:)
4250:)
4238:,
4228:)
4178:)
4047:)
3953:)
3938:)
3914:)
3900:)
3882:)
3858:no
3792:)
3784:.
3775:)
3681:to
3562:)
3484:".
3482:in
2944:"?
2297:)
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1936:)
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1692:)
1581:)
1557:)
1549:--
1484:)
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1374:--
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699:--
666:"?
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158:is
149:,
67:.
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