443:: Although I'd never have thought I'd support anything regarding the Ottawa Senators, I think the users involved did a great job with this one. Seeing as Maxim already addressed any concerns that I could have possibly had, I think it is a great list to read. Lots of great content, and well organized. I definitely enjoyed reading it, and see no reason not to give it FL status. -
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This looks good. I cannot see any inconsistencies. It has everything that other similar FLs do except for noting the captains. Add that and I'll support. Add
Alternate Captains (essentially the same as Captains) and I'll super support.
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The lead is still weak. Can't you talk about players who have made most appearances, for example, or scored most goals, made most shutouts, whatever? Use your imagination but I'd expect to see the lead at least twice the current
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Before submitting the FLC, I was thinking myself about the short lead. See, I can't think of anything else to put in there. --
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In the lead, since the tables are not sortable, you could mention who the all-time goal or point leaders are for the team.
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That'd make a sea of blue, with random dashes of grey in the row as you shouldn't repeat links to the same article.
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I modeled this list after other featured NHL players lists. All concerns/comments will be addressed.
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Is Wing a proper noun? I'd uncapitalise it in the key. And Played as well. And Loss.
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You don't have to have the first paragraph in the key for seasons.
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239:"UFA" in the caption - expand it for non-experts.
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