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I decided to move the information from the subsections into physical and overdose instead, since they contained a mix of information from both; I figured it would be a bit cumbersome to have therapeutic dose and overdose information in each subsection.
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I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to improve it to FA status; consequently, any feedback on improvements relevant to FA criteria would be appreciated. The article is currently GA nominated.
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This will get some of the lower-hanging fruit out of the way. There doesn't appear to be any major problems with the article that would stop it from being promoted to GA status. Kind regards,
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Hello! A detailed and thorough text. I can't confess to know much about Amphetamines academically, but relating to the article: The following paragraphs or sentences do not have citations:
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Many of the side-effects listed in "physical" could be moved to sub-sections: for example, hypo and hypertension could be moved to the 'cardiac side-effects' section.
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This source doesn't have an access date: "Jump up ^ Australian Drug Foundation. "Amphetamines (speed): what are the effects?". myDr.com.au."
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Citations in this paragraph "In addition, amphetamine is also used by some professional" could be lumped together
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Just finished the last of the edit suggestions. Thanks again for the ideas/advice.
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One notable side-effect you may like to refer to is the development of the
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There is a double line before the paragraph "Dopamine"
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