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I've listed this article for peer review because… I've been working very hard on expanding, cleaning up, and adding sources and refs to it over the past few weeks, starting from a small stub.
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I would appreciate any criticism, praise, comments, thoughts, copyedit suggestions, etc, that anyone has for this article. I'd like to eventually nominate it for GA.
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Overall, the article is informative, well-referenced, has a good flow to it, and should not require too much more to pass GA. Again, congrats on the good work!
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Kind of vague, I would reword slightly to specify the type of success; e.g., "although not a major commercial success".
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