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Chemotherapy and nausea. What is the mechanism? I know that persons undergoing chemotherapy often report foul tastes in their mouth/bad breath. Is this part of the nausea? I am not sure if these represent genuine symptoms (i.e. pulmonary excretion of the drug or its metabolites or secretion into the
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Thank you very much for your comment. I have merged quite a bit, changed sections to bullet lists where appropriate, and you are right: it does seem to flow much better. But, too many bullet lists and too little prose?
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Some medical conditions associated with a high risk of nausea and/or vomiting include chemotherapy and radiotherapy induced nausea and vomiting, anticipatory nausea and vomiting and malignant bowel obstruction.
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These include malignant bowel obstruction (MBO), chemotherapy induced nausea and vomiting (CINV), anticipatory nausea and vomiting (ANV), and radiotherapy induced nausea and vomiting (RINV).
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Nausea and vomiting may be experienced as the most distressful side effects of cytotoxic drugs and may result in patients delaying or refusing further radiotherapy or chemotherapy.
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