276:"During the 1880s, sections of the American press popularized the notion that the West had been won and there was nothing left to conquer in the United States. The time when great scouts like Kit Carson, Daniel Boone, and Davy Crockett could explore and master the wild and uncharted Western territories was coming to a close. Contemporary scouts like Buffalo Bill, Wild Bill Hickok, and Texas Jack Omohundro, were leaving the old West to became entertainers" - source?
390:"These relentless attacks helped the Republicans win control of Congress in 1918" - you might want to clarify this a bit. By "relentless attacks", do you mean just the publication of the book, or something else? Also, someone unfamiliar with American politics would not realize the significance of Republicans controlling Congress with Wilson as president, or why attacks by Roosevelt on Wilson would have that effect
408:"president of the Southwest Museum of Los Angeles from 1938 until 1940, and he served as both the Honorary President of the Arizona Boy Scouts and as a regional executive for the BSA throughout the 1940s until his death in 1947." - the next page of the source states that Burnham was president of the museum, but not when, and does not mention Scouts at all; source?
417:"Burnham's eyes possessed a far-away look such as those acquired by people whose occupation has caused them to watch continually at sea or on great plains" is quite similar in phrasing to "grey-blue eyes that have in them a far-away look such as those acquire whose occupation has caused them to watch continually at sea or on great plains"
295:"Field Marshal Frederick Roberts, one of the British Army's most successful commanders of the 19th century, was appointed to take overall command of British forces, relieving General Redvers Buller, following a number of Boer successes in the early weeks of the war" - given source appears to support only that Roberts was appointed
285:"It was here that Burnham uncovered many artifacts in the huge granite ruins of the ancient civilization of Great Zimbabwe" - from my reading of the source, the ruins were discovered during an expedition that included not only "here" (his tract) but also areas of "Barotzeland and other regions to the north of Mashonaland"
393:"Roosevelt might have been a serious candidate for president in 1920, but lingering malaria kept him out of the race" - not sure this is quite accurate, as the source indicates that during his last hospitalization he was planning to enter the race in June 1919, and does not connect that hospitalization to malaria
167:
this article for FA. This former FA is currently a GA and while it received substantial support during the most recent FAC, it was not quite enough to reach FA. The article is free of major cleanup banners, it has not been through PR recently, and all of the actionable issues that came out the most
423:"fearing these habits would injure the acuteness of his sense of smell" is quite similar in phrasing to "fearing, as he told me, lest it should injure the acuteness of his sense of smell". Several other passages are also quite closely paraphrased or near-verbatim from this source (FN160)
453:"Roderick awoke screaming and rushed to tell his grandmother about his nightmare. The next morning, a cable arrived" is quite similar in phrasing to "Roderick awakened screaming and ran into his grandmother's room to tell her of the nightmare. The next morning, a cable from his father"
787:
You are in several cases including an ISBN for a modern edition while citing the original edition of a work - it would be preferable to either cite the modern edition (including orig_year if desired) or use an OCLC or other identifying number rather than the incorrect
347:"It was also here that Baden-Powell began to wear his signature Stetson campaign hat and neckerchief, like those worn by Burnham, for the first time" - not sure the source supports connecting this to Burnham; it seems to imply more the influence of the cowboy shows
387:"Roosevelt had been an outspoken critic of Wilson's neutrality policies, so even though Roosevelt had made several attempts to come to an agreement with Wilson, the President was unwilling to accept any compromise" - not sure this is supported by the given source
512:
On that note, be careful to avoid presenting the subject in a positive light by minimizing or not including contrasting viewpoints or disputes - in order to be comprehensive and balanced, we ought to present all views from reliable sources (with due weight, of
535:"she returned to find their house burned down, but the baby Frederick was safe, fast asleep in the basket with the corn husks" could be more concisely expressed as "she returned to find their house burned down but baby Frederick safe and asleep in the basket"
601:"Burnham reasoned that a dam could provide year-round water to rich alluvial soil in the valley; turning the region into one of the garden spots of the world and generate much needed electricity" - punctuation is incorrect here, check for other instances
356:"At the urging of several youth leaders, Baden-Powell decided to adapt his scouting handbook specifically to training boys" is quite similar in phrasing to "At the urging of several youth leaders, he decided to adapt the manual for the training of boys"
307:"Burnham spent much time behind the Boer lines gathering information and blowing up railway bridges and tracks" is quite similar in phrasing to "He spent much time behind the Boer lines...gathering information he also hlew up railway bridges and tracks"
249:
FN18: my copy gives a different version of this quote: "it is imperative that a scout should know the history, tradition, religion, social customs, and superstitions of whatever country or people he is called on to work in or among" - can you
239:
The first sentence of Early life isn't supported by FN5, so you'll probably want a different citation after it; FN5 also doesn't specify where Edwin was ordained and refers to him as
Congregational, which I understand to be distinct from
268:
There is no PD attribution tag for FN10, and yet "regretted this as much as
Burnham and paid him a great tribute in his book" is taken verbatim from that source. Do further attributions tags need to be added for sources other than
508:
The ODNB describes an inquiry into the veracity of the account of Mlimo's death and suggests that
Burnham was let go from the British South Africa Company as a result - you would probably need to at least mention this version of
353:"a guide to outdoor fun"? The source connects this book to skills and training, but a later one to a less militaristic approach. However, the phrase "used by boys' groups as a guide to outdoor fun" does appear verbatim in FN92
215:"he and his business partner John Hays Hammond formed the Burnham Exploration Company and became wealthy from oil discovered in California" - article doesn't associate Hammond senior with either the company or the oil wealth
522:"even though Roosevelt had made several attempts to come to an agreement with Wilson, the President was unwilling to accept any compromise" seems, particularly without clear sourcing, to be a rather one-sided view of events
470:"It was to document the founding of the Scouting movement" - I don't think either source supports this, and in fact FN201 directly contradicts it; the sources also say it's about Baden-Powell and neither mention Burnham
384:"Burnham together with Charles Frederick Holder made important archaeological discoveries..." - from what I can tell, both sources suggest that Burnham made the discoveries and that Holder came back with him later
288:
I'm not sure FN48 supports any of the material it's used to cite: it says basically only that they killed Mlimo in a cave, and also says that they tried to capture him first (the article seems to imply
191:
I'm confused by the image licensing here - several images are tagged as pre-1923, but why are some of those also PD-user? Also, if the latter tag is kept, you'll probably want to correct the username
1054:
Thanks, Dank. Your comments are on target. I've changed all except "age of 3" to "age of three". Either way is just fine with me, but I'll wait to hear if there is a consensus for this change.
456:"Hemingway was already behind schedule with other commitments, however, and no work had been done on the movie when he committed suicide" - this doesn't appear to be supported by the cited source
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I believe
American grammar generally requires a comma before "and" when it connects independent clauses; in any event, there are many instances where this type of phrasing seems a bit awkward
879:
Be consistent in whether you include location/publisher for periodicals and in whether you include full page range in
References (probably you should for journals and possibly magazines)
772:
Baden-Powell 1908: the GBooks link and ISBN resolve to two different modern versions of this book; which of these was consulted, and does it match the pagination of the original version?
797:
Be consistent in whether you abbreviate state names in references, or indeed whether you include state names at all (for example, you have both Los
Angeles and Los Angeles, California)
569:" Once inside the cave, they waited until Mlimo entered...Burnham and Armstrong waited until Mlimo entered the cave" - repetitive. Check for other instances of repetition or redundancy
447:"On his arrival in England, Burnham was commanded to dine with Queen Victoria" is quite similar in phrasing to "On arrival in English he was commanded to dine with Queen Victoria"
885:
Prichard: given citation mixes details of the original and 2004 editions - linked version is the original and has different publisher information. Which version did you consult?
344:"the backgrounds of these two scouts was as strange a contrast as it is possible to imagine" - would suggest replacing this statement with a quote to that effect from the source
301:" Cape Town is at the opposite end of the globe from the Klondike" is quite similar in phrasing to "Although Cape Town is at the opposite end of the globe from the Klondike"
206:"He later worked as a civilian tracker for the United States Army in the Apache Wars" - the way it reads in the article, this came before the material it follows in the lead
126:
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Be consistent in what is wikilinked when in references - for example, Blackwood's is linked the first two times but not the third, should be every time or first time only
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FN68: part of this quote appears to be missing. Confirmed from the second source, the quote as presented omits the phrase "which you have from time to time been engaged"
212:"Burnham returned to America in 1905" - article isn't clear on date, particularly given his time in Mexico. Unless you meant America as in North America rather than US?
502:
Avoid using a narrative tone: "together they dreamed of some day becoming great scouts", for example, seems more appropriate to a story than to an encyclopedia article
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572:"Burnham decided it was time to leave Africa and move on to other adventures. The family returned to California. Soon after, Fred traveled" - why the shift in naming?
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File:Esperanza_stone_burnham1910.jpg: possible to give more specific source information? Also, I think caption would read better if we switched the period for a comma
585:"In an unusual step for a foreigner, Burnham received" - confusing: as Burnham didn't take the step, "for" is incorrect, and probably "step" would be better replaced
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350:"During their joint scouting missions, Baden-Powell and Burnham discussed the concept of a broad training program" - I'm not sure this is supported by the source
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310:"The six-shooter Burnham purchased as a teenager in Prescott, Arizona, which he kept all his life and later used in Rhodesia, East Africa and Mexico" - source?
974:
Your presentation of the historical debate concerning the Wilson patrol seems to me to be a bit one-sided, particularly in phrasing like "as shaky as it is"
485:"In spite of a shower of bullets and spears, the three made it to Forbes, but the battle raging there was just as intense" seems rather non-neutral in tone
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FN93: "travel in wild country without either a compass or map" is quite close in phrasing to "tavelling without either compass or maps in wild country"
563:"found their way through the Matopos Hills to a sacred cave not many miles from the Mangwe district, to a sanctuary" - this phrasing is a bit unclear
864:
Lott 1976: ISSN and OCLC resolve to two different publications, neither of which is entirely consistent with the given citation. Same for Lott 1977
203:"learning scouting from some of the last of the old cowboys and frontiersmen of the American Southwest" - not sure this is supported by the article
800:
Be consistent in whether you include country names in refs and if so how - for example, you usually have just "London" but then "London, England"
200:
Infobox says he was honorary president of BSA; article says he was honorary Scout and honorary president of
Arizona Boy Scouts. Which is correct?
901:
Thrapp: which volume? Be sure to include volume number for multivolume works, and for encyclopedias you may want to include entry name as well.
246:
FN11 also discusses
Burnham's first experience being 'under fire", which he states "influenced entire career"; that might be worth including
541:"He had lost all of his family in the Indian wars" - given the number of conflicts that can be so described, is it possible to specify?
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Plaster: ISBN leads to original edition; given the updates in 2006, should clarify that this is a new edition and include the new ISBN
651:
gives previous names as "Michigan Mining School" and "Michigan
College of Mines", but not "Michigan School of Mines" - can you verify?
760:
Be consistent in whether you abbreviate page ranges or not: use either the model of "pp. 493–495." or of "pp. 338–48.", but not mixed
959:
First note needs clarifying: "latterly" should be "later", and "Congressional" means something quite different from "Congregational"
554:"Judge Aaron Hackney, editor of the local Arizona Silver Belt newspaper and friends with Burnham" - should be "friend of Burnham's"
613:
Be consistent in what variety of spelling is used - it's mostly
American, but I see some British, for example "centre of Bulawayo"
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FN166 says that Rod spoke "Kaffir", a group which includes far more languages than just Sindebele - how do we know which he spoke?
304:"In an unusual step for a foreigner, Burnham received a command post from Roberts and the British Army rank of captain" - source?
1074:
This PR was opened one month ago and no new comments have been posted in the last two weeks. Thanks to everyone for your input.
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Haggard 1926: Project Gutenberg of Australia was not the original (1926) publisher, and are they really headquartered in London?
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Is there a particular reason you've chosen not to cite either ODNB or ANB? They both include details not covered by this article
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Barrett: my search suggests that the second author is Vallance not Valiance; also check formatting, add issue and page numbers
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FN105 mentions that details of Burnham's involvement in the Shangani Patrol were "held in some suspicion in later years", and
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You mention the "findings of the Court of Inquiry", but don't actually say that an inquiry was held or what its findings were
708:"Burnham Exploration Company paid out $ 10.2 million in dividends" - how much approximately would this be in modern currency?
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Bryant is missing volume number and should probably also include complete pagination for consistency with other periodicals
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1014:"how to track Apache by tracing the odor of burning mescal": how to track Apache by detecting the odor of burning mescal
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538:"The young Burnham attended schools in Iowa and there he met Blanche Blick" - should be either repunctuated or rephrased
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727:"but he soon went back to herding cattle and prospecting...but soon he was back prospecting and scouting" - repetitive
426:
The van Wyk book says he died of a stroke; why have you chosen to go with the Lott source? What do other sources say?
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669:"Spanish-American" and "Pretoria-Delagoa Bay" should both be converted to endashes; check for similar problems with
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1011:"attacked New Ulm, Minnesota, a town near where the Burnhams lived": attacked the nearby town of New Ulm, Minnesota
499:; phrasing like "as strange a contrast as it is possible to imagine", for example, would seem to be too non-neutral
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van Wyk: link goes to GBooks search; should either link directly to the publication in question or not link at all
944:"Killed the Matabele God: Burnham, the American Scout, May End Uprising" has the ISSN for a different publication
692:" Following his investiture, the British press hailed him as: "The King of Army Scouts"." - don't need colon here
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I've listed this article for peer review with WikiProject Military History because I will be co-nominating with
473:
Source for the details of the coin? The given source provides only number, year, issuer, and event commemorated
666:
Don't link the same terms in section hatnote and first sentence, as for example in the Second Boer War section
209:"his rank of major was formally given to him by King Edward VII" - wasn't he promoted before Victoria's death?
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recent FAC have been addressed. I hope you enjoy reading about Burnham and I welcome your constructive input.
1033:"Thirty-second Degree Mason": I think "Thirty-Second ..." is more common, but I'm not sure what MOSCAPS says.
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438:"Burnham's first son, Roderick (August 22, 1886 – July 2, 1976), was born in Pasadena, California" - source?
225:
Can you explain why you're including title coordinates? The infobox template documentation specifies inline
1040:. Bottom line: I don't have a lot to teach you guys, and you have quite a few things to teach me. - Dank (
941:"Finest Hour" is actually the name of the journal; what is the title being cited? This ref needs reworking
965:
Note 2 doesn't really clarify who the Gordons are in relation to the feud, and needs editing for grammar
962:
What is the function of "he met a man he describes as" at the end of the second paragraph of Early life?
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Barnes: WorldCat and GBooks for that ISBN both say published 1992; is another edition being referred to?
685:"Burnham was born on May 11, 1861 on a Sioux Indian reservation" - should include comma after 1861. See
381:"one of the garden spots of the world" is quite similar in phrasing to "be the garden spot of the world"
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FN147 mentions a different Burnham serving in 1934; how do we know that this Burnham's term ended then?
575:"it was directly caused" - I think you might mean "more immediately caused", given what precedes this?
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402:"the largest spy ring conviction in U.S. history" does not appear to be supported by the given source
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Be consistent in whether author initials are spaced or unspaced, and in whether they include periods
441:"He attended the Michigan School of Mines (now Michigan Technological University) in 1910" - source?
1023:"he did not yet view himself as a criminal": Why "yet"? Did he view himself as a criminal later on?
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947:"Personal": link requires login; should either use one that doesn't or note "subscription required"
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ISSN 03624331 is for the Sunday edition of the NYT; there's a separate ISSN for the other editions
654:
The bighorn sheep species is usually not capitalized; "Giant eland" usually has eland in lowercase
663:
Be consistent in whether you use "field craft" or "fieldcraft"; check for similar inconsistencies
1005:"Burnham was distinguished in several battles": Burnham distinguished himself in several battles
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Haggard 1896: GBooks and WorldCat both give a different title for that ISBN; please double-check
262:
The bit about the orange grove is in FN10, but I don't see it in FN23 - am I missing something?
529:"world-traveling adventurer", if that phrasing is kept - you might consider rephrasing anyways
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in mind, as there are multiple instances of phrasing that I feel conflict with that guideline
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article gives its dates as 18-27 February, while this article uses 17-26 - which is correct?
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519:"In an astute display of political trickery" - suggest using a direct quote from the source
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292:"American news reports of the time described him as having a cruel, crafty look" - source?
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751:"The Fire that shall Never Die" - volume/issue formatting doesn't match other periodicals
736:
Suggest wikilinking Silver Buffalo Award, Santa Barbara, and Three Rivers in article body
675:"Wild West Show" or "Wild West show"? Check for further inconsistencies in capitalization
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Gann: GBooks and WorldCat both give a different title for that ISBN; please double-check
617:"300-acre (120-ha) tract of land". You might find it helpful to review the article with
432:"She was buried three days later in the town's Pioneer Cemetery, plot No. 144" - source?
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482:"fading from the frontier" seems rather colloquial in tone; check for other instances
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gives a different author order and publisher name. Please also include volume number
748:"endure the most appalling fatigues" should be phrased in a more encyclopedic manner
739:
Is there an article that explains Wilson's neutrality policies that could be linked?
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FN9 says that Burnham's father was in Mankato at the time of the attack, not New Ulm
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mistakes are no longer capital offenses at FAC, they at least still raise grimaces.
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Most of the paragraph about the Bighorn sheep is quite close in phrasing to FN149
279:"shower of bullets and spears" should be quoted, as it's directly from the source
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Be consistent in what capitalization rules you're using for titles and subtitles
463:, was conceived and begun by Cecil B. DeMille" is quite similar in phrasing to "
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Roosevelt: why does this have page number in References rather than short cite?
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Fisher 1930: quote marks within quote marks should be single; check for others
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Should identify briefly who the Gordons were, as they aren't mentioned in the
591:"to obtain information on the enemy, which he did, and then he escaped" -: -->
588:
Read through the article and consider where the phrasing might be more concise
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ANB notes that Burnham was essentially broke as of 1914 and returned to the US
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states that he declined the Victoria Cross - is there any merit to that claim?
938:"The Fauna of the British Empire": doi goes to a completely different article
479:"the young Burnham also learned much...Burnham learned much" seems repetitive
338:
I'm not sure that the description of the Lovat Scouts merits a full paragraph
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Marston: publication date is actually 2009, the GBooks listing is incorrect
359:"There is an especial significance..." is long enough to need blockquoting
298:"Soon after arriving in South Africa on the RMS Dunottar Castle" - source?
282:
FN32 does not identify to whom the quote was addressed, although FN34 does
926:"Arizona National Wildlife Refuges": missing the actual publication name
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took place - the latter would seem to me a better link in any case, and
222:, that section should contain only relevant internal links, not external
678:
Closing punctuation should usually be outside of quotation marks - see
644:" feature length Shangani Patrol (film) (1970)" - should pipe that link
525:
Much of the first two paragraphs of Personal life seem a bit subjective
532:
Be consistent in whether you use "bighorn" or "big horn" for the sheep
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236:; not sure which, if any, of those listed are the correct individuals
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Is there somewhere to wikilink mescal to? If not, at least link aloe
699:" - no colon here either. Check for further examples of colon misuse
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Press Reference Library is the series name, not part of the title.
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FN5, 27, 29, 49: page formatting; stopped there, check for others
660:
Suggest wikilinking commander-in-chief directly to the US section
375:"Frederick Russell Burnham II, was a leader in the BSA" - source?
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You might find it helpful to seek out a copy-editor, perhaps at
592:"to obtain information on the enemy; having done so, he escaped"
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Be consistent in whether editions are spelled out or in numbers
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Colby: link given leads to a different article and publication
610:"Boy Scouts" should be consistently capitalized in that manner
324:, which states that it is a separate location from where the
923:"Animals from Africa": given ISSN is for neither publication
824:
Please double-check bibliographic details for Forbes et al;
968:
Marston problematizes Gann's vision of the Shangani Patrol
791:
Burnham 1944: WorldCat suggests Mary Everett as a co-author
861:
Compare treatment of volume for the other two Lott sources
566:"100 huts filled with many warriors" - "many" is redundant
420:"steady, grey-blue eyes" is a direct quote from the source
953:
Why are we fixing the image size for the lead image? See
870:
Be consistent in how volume numbers are treated/formatted
821:
Who is Michael Forster and what is his area of expertise?
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Davis: are you citing the paperback or hardcover version?
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Why are you repeating a cited source as an external link?
809:
Why is formatting for Du Toit so unlike the other books?
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is an epic film conceived and begun by Cecil B. DeMille"
444:"helping to develop the first wells in Mexico" - source?
366:- this article does not appear to discuss this? Why not?
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FN78 says the Lovat Scouts were formed in 1900, not 1899
1026:"Arizona-Mexico", " "soldier of fortune,": If dash and
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FN115 doesn't appear to mention the Wa Syndicate at all
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Hamilton College: title needs endash, check for others
1017:"could follow the mescal odor": could follow the odor
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Compare publisher name for the first two Lott sources
1001:
Hi again, guys, I just have some prose suggestions:
873:
Be consistent in what punctuation precedes subtitles
429:"He and his father became minority owners" - source?
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is for the index rather than the publication itself
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Farwell 1976: link gives different month and volume
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Burnham 1912: punctuation doesn't match other books
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Is Amebelodon burnhami worth a redlink or redirect?
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FN134 says the spy ring was jailed in 1941 not 1942
711:Suggest putting the Bibliography image on the left
702:Don't include spaces before colons, even in titles
399:"Duquesne was twice arrested by the FBI" - source?
256:FN69 doesn't seem to mention a burst blood-vessel
849:Juang: series and volume shouldn't be italicized
582:"when received the following telegram" - grammar
259:Neither FN10 nor 11 specify where he met Blanche
775:References list should be in alphabetical order
450:"to spend the night at Osborne House" - source?
913:Wilson: Gale Research is in Detroit, isn't it?
265:I don't see any mention of high school in FN10
932:"Ecclesiastical and Clerical": doubled period
634:Can you explain your rationale for including
476:Why do Birchard and Davis have the same ISBN?
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150:This peer review discussion has been closed.
557:Newspaper name should be italicized in text
724:Should wikilink Sonora on first appearance
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631:"35-minute silent black-and-white video"
624:Kit Carson is linked twice in Early life
616:"300 acre (120 ha) tract of land" -: -->
907:Weideman: link includes a second author
495:Also be careful to adhere carefully to
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1020:"he met a man he describes as": he met
929:"Classified Advertising": which issue?
488:Consider evaluating this article with
757:FN163, 200: spacing; check for others
730:Suggest wikilinking burro and malaria
630:"35 min. silent b&w video" -: -->
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551:, alt text shouldn't repeat captions
528:"world traveling adventurer" -: -->
364:our article on the event elaborates
980:Who are Coghlan and Wools-Sampson?
595:"plodded steadily on" - colloquial
320:In that same sentence you link to
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733:"6,100 km2" - missing superscript
1008:"the age of 3": the age of three
578:"who he should appoint" -: -->
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743:The Foes Of Our Own Household
705:Spell out unit names in prose
636:http://www.howardburnham.com/
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994:16:50, 12 October 2013 (UTC)
689:for further usage guidelines
1064:17:32, 9 October 2013 (UTC)
1046:18:17, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
812:Emdashes should be unspaced
766:FN50 harvlink isn't working
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1098:October 2013 peer reviews
846:Holder: doi returns error
28:Frederick Russell Burnham
910:West 1935: ISSN? Volume?
579:"whom he should appoint"
271:Real Soldiers of Fortune
186:Comments from Nikkimaria
852:No spaces before colons
197:No citations to DeGroot
916:ISSN given is for the
657:WCU is now called IUCN
598:"out of the Pretoria"?
560:Tombstone or Tombsone?
896:The Los Angeles Times
638:as an external link?d
326:Battle of Driefontein
18:Knowledge:Peer review
918:Atlanta Constitution
459:"Another epic film,
315:Battle of Paardeberg
719:Pleasant Valley War
330:British Cape Colony
745:is worth a redlink
892:Los Angeles Times
763:FN35 needs endash
142:Watch peer review
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461:On My Honor
334:Cape Colony
322:Driefontein
230:Harry White
104:visual edit
1076:Ctatkinson
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220:WP:SEEALSO
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