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I've listed this article for peer review because I expanded it considerably last week and I am considering taking it to GAN soon. As such, I would like some feedback on its current standard, and any suggestions about possible improvements that I should make before going to GAN. Also, I'd appreciate a
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Thanks for taking a look. I've made a number of changes to deal with the above points. Would you mind taking a look and letting me know what you think? In regards to the sections on logistics and air operations, yes I will see what I can do. As it's not something I'm familiar with, though, it will
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I'm sure that's what the communiqué said, but I think a bit more should be said about the action in which 57 men were killed and LST 471 and 473 had to be towed back to
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