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I'm not sure if it's necessary to mention them in the lead since they are not big topics of the subject. The information about monitoring is for
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I did some revising. The section also has "Several types of volcanic eruptions have since created different landforms across the NCVP, including shield volcanoes, lava domes, stratovolcanoes and cinder cones. Other volcanic formations, notably subglacial volcanoes, take their shape from the
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