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Andy thank you for all these comments which I've edited along with some of the more general suggestions you've made about short sentances & comma misuse. I've removed the logo of the Mendip
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This article has been rated GA for a long time & has had more information added since. I would welcome any comments which could help improve it in the hope of reaching FA status, and feel that the text, images and general structure would benefit from further editing.—
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At the end of the second Lead paragraph sports and leisure are mentioned. The third paragraph goes back to geology (which is first introduced in the first paragraph) and then back to sports and leisure activities. Is there a more logical way of organising this
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been discovered or explored in the 20th century. The caves which are easily accessible to the public are at
Cheddar Gorge and Caves and Wookey Hole, but the
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Some more general notes, some of the 1-senetence paragraphs should be merged or expanded, since such short paragraphs are generally looked down upon.
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The prose in the top half of the article is a lot stronger than that of the bottom half, so try to focus more attention on the last few sections:
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Ecology section has 4 paragraphs without any references, it would be great to see atleast one per paragraph (even if it is the same one!).
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specialist equipment and knowledge. The active Mendip Caving Group organises trips and continues to discover new caverns.
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