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Jackson's direction into line" - Sent by who, and was it just on this point? Bring into line with what exactly? I think the point does come across, but might benefit from minor reworking along the lines ".. to bring Jackson's
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Aragorn needed a single love-interest" (Not exactly those words, but hopefully you can see something of what I mean.)
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