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The old platform lengths are in this section because the section mentions platform extensions to the south of the original platforms. This is particularly relevant to the "Design" section where the platform extensions are mentioned as having a slightly different design from the original platforms.
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Without context, the detail of the platform extension looks out of place.As for the control house, you're right that it's not a current station detail. However, given that the history section talks more about events (as opposed to descriptions), I'm not sure that this subsection would fit there.
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I'm not sure that this is a GAN requirement. This parameter is still useful as it determines when the source was originally accessed. Besides, InternetArchiveBot doesn't automatically remove the access dates when archiving links - I'd imagine that it would do so if the access date was truly
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I have added these. It's worth noting that I cannot add the url-access parameter to the ProQuest source as there is nothing in the url parameter. Technically, the ProQuest link is only an identifier; thus, it is seen as a print source, not as an online source.
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I prefer to have the station layout section before the history section - I think describing the station as it currently is should come before how it was - but that's a personal preference and not a requirement. Having the lede match the order is
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This section should only include current station details. The old platform lengths are not relevant in this section, and the details of the no-longer-extant control house and headhouse should be in the history section.
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Currently, the lead follows the order in which the sections are presented in the body (the second paragraph is about history and the third is about the station layout). This is also the case in similar articles such as
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Right now, there's a stack of 6 images on the right sides - 3 from history, 3 from layout. Some of these need to be moved or eliminated so that they properly stay with the text and do not squeeze the citations.
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Not strictly required for GA, but I strongly encourage you to do with all articles especially GA etc: Add alt text for images. It's the #1 thing you can do as an editor to improve accessibility.
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Unfortunately, the source doesn't elaborate beyond that. However, there have been several instances in which the LPC has made such compromises (for example, most of the interior of
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seems to imply that this was the northern end of cosntruction, but since it opened as far as 145th Street, that wasn't the case. Was 82nd to 104th just a certain contract?
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Per discussions at Wikiproject Trains, an HTML layout is not needed for a simple platform arrangement like this, especially with only a single service with no variation.
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Consistently use either "station house" or "control house" (preferably the former) - using both makes it sound like there were two separate buildings.
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Yes (there isn't an entrance in the middle of Broadway anymore), but I've yet to find references for when it was carried out.
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Archive link for the MTA neighborhood map (currently cite #50) is broke. I'd suggest replacing it with an archive.org link.
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Hmm, you have a good point. Perhaps this parameter should just be disabled for all articles, which have the same problem.
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Gotcha. I'd recommend noting that it was carried out (even without a date) rather than leaving it hanging.
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Lede is a little on the short side, though acceptable. I would merge the first and third paragraphs.
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Further reading doesn't seem very relevant - should either be cited in the prose, or removed
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Sources requiring subscription etc (like the Proquest cite) should be tagged as such
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access-date should be used for links to news articles on commercial websites
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Were both platforms extended in 1948? If so, "extension" should be plural.
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Cathedral Parkway–110th Street station (IRT Broadway–Seventh Avenue Line)
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Indeed, it was that contract, rather than the whole thing. My bad.
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was live as of April 21, 2020, but it may be dead in the future.
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Ugh, that's annoying. Thanks for adding them the best you could.
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I would certainly support removing it from all NYCS articles.
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It is not required for linked documents that do not change.
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Some detail on the nature of the compromise would be good.
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Was the 1969 contract actually carried out? If so, when?
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Okay, those are both fine. I do recommend two changes:
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The southbound platform at 103rd Street station in 2021
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I see your point. I was focusing more on the sentence
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86th Street station (IRT Broadway–Seventh Avenue Line)
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79th Street station (IRT Broadway–Seventh Avenue Line)
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