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thanks for the review and comments. Hope you found the article a good read. I've implemented the suggested changes. As for the
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When you discuss the junior surgeon being sent, I assume you mean the HMS ship. It isn't exactly clear here since you just discussed another vessel.
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Again, another great article... I found just a few issues with it that should be easy to address.
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