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While reworking this article in an extra sandbox of mine so that includes the entire outbreak, I stumbled upon a glaring issue: the injury count listed in NCEI (71) and the one in the article (82) do not match. I understand that the NWS Jackson was the source where this information came from, but the
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As a side note, this is a major beef of mine with individual tornado articles. There appears to be a tendency to lump the impact into the
Meteorological synopsis section, detailing what was destroyed/damaged where along the tornado's path. Currently, there is only one example of a featured article of
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Though some of the improvements have been made, the article is still not where it needs to be for GA. I gave a little extra time since I saw you put some effort in towards the closing date of this GAN; however, there's too much left. As such, I'm failing this nomination. Please address all the above
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standards, and more or less should be failed right away; however, I'll give you some time to try and work it out. There are major issues across the board with this article and I've given my suggestions as to how to best fix them. I'll leave this review open for a week to allow you time to patch this
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Hey there, I'll be reviewing this article starting tomorrow morning. As a quick heads up, I've noticed a lot of issues just with a quick glance and I get the feeling this article will likely be failing GAN. That said, I'll still give a full review so the necessary improvements can be made. Regards,
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The most blatant issue with the article is the lack of recent information. Looking at the references, all the sources were taken in the immediate aftermath of the tornado. With that, there clearly is a lack of long-term recovery information (FEMA most notably). No information appears to have been
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meteorological information within this section. The information presented here essentially is a summary of the damage caused by the tornado along its track. These details are best suited to be rewritten in the Impact section, rather than where they currently are.
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