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I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern
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from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)
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Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's
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It has, or needs, cleanup banners that are unquestionably still valid. These include{{cleanup}}, {{POV}}, {{unreferenced}} or large numbers of {{citation needed}}, {{clarify}}, or similar tags. (See also
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I feel the article (like the lead) is missing a senetnce/paragraph about what the article is about. We can't just expect readers to know what we are talking about from the title. Best Wishes,
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The season officially began on May 15 in the eastern Pacific, and on June 1 in the central Pacific; they both ended on November 30 - this is cited - can we cite in body instead? Best Wishes,
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Might need to come up with a better style for the subsections in "systems" (maybe by location or month), and use
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Could we fix the first sentence? It doesn't actually say what the article is about Best Wishes,
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This can't be done without consensus as it would affect every season article worldwide.
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I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have
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I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.
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you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed.
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What would you suggest? This is similar to other season articles. See
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It is a long way from meeting any one of the six good article criteria
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near- to above-average season - is this a quote? Best Wishes,
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Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status,
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Short description? The one on Wikidata is huge! Best Wishes,
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Does "most-active" mean most named storms? Best Wishes,
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2005 Atlantic hurricane season
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